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GOODLUCK

GOODLUCK The oracle predicted, not long agoThat an unusual change will comeTo the great house of Akwa OwoWhen a minor will be made a kingWe found it hard to accept as trueDue to the complicated conditionsAnd the unfeasible demands of the gods The struggle for the crown came hardBetween the three big clannish lordsWho felt it was their bequest to ruleFrom the southern seas to the desert northLeaving the vassals to find their holesA hindrance of some sort, thus createdFor the aspiring ethnic minorities The gods demanded the unattainableBring a human hair that grew in the palmAssist a roaring lion deliver in labourAnd bring the horn of a mature unicornWe sort for substitutes of some kind, by cashFor the agents to help, since they knew howBut the gods said no, the job was meant for us When we look back, what we saw was a puzzleFrom the differences between the gods and menThe gods sent us to attempt the impossible tasksThe agents demanded cash as a way out, insteadTo enrich their purses in our helpless situationThe unlikely has become achievable, a minorityOur son, before their eyes, has become the king






 
— t. reflexion, Feb 13, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

I do so very much appreciate the importance

and craftsmanship of your work, Trex. Yet it so often gets left un-commented on here at Neopoet. You should ask why. Part of it is certainly the insularity of people from other lands and cultures who choose not to be confronted by the issues you raise. Their loss. But your works seem to me to develop a certain "sameness" over time. May I earnestly suggest you give yourself and your readers a break by writing some humourous or lighter pieces? Or experimenting with different forms. Don't get me wrong, this suggestion, I believe, will improve your poetry skills all round. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

It is true...

when late President Umaru Musa Yar'Adua took ill, there was controversy over giving his Vice the powers to execute presidential duties. He was then made Acting President. As fate would have it, the President died a few days ago and Dr. Goodluck Ebele Jonathan, a minority from South-south, first in our history has become the President. Thank you for the comments and for the encouragement. Best wishes. T.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear T

brilliant poem ... you roped me in and held me to the page this story is wonderful ... its message never stop reaching for the unattainable ... one day you may Kind regards Love Jayne-Chloe
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Dear Jayne-Chloe

Thank you for the comments and for finding time to read. I wrote this before the swearing in of the new President. Best wishes T.