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Feb 13, 2010
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Having Sex Above Her Head
piano notes
mother plays
midsummer’s wedding march
measures lap him
as he lays a girl on fire
just above the piano
climax meets the chord
he thrust to rhythm
mom’s playing
spent she didn’t hear
the song
post coitus he amused
a piece pre eternity
performed in tempo
to his tryst on
a guillotine
only two weeks
till fleeing the
country
mother plays
midsummer’s wedding march
measures lap him
as he lays a girl on fire
just above the piano
climax meets the chord
he thrust to rhythm
mom’s playing
spent she didn’t hear
the song
post coitus he amused
a piece pre eternity
performed in tempo
to his tryst on
a guillotine
only two weeks
till fleeing the
country
— Ladderwords, Feb 13, 2010
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
a strange piece, kinda oedipal [appropriate geographically 8) ]
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
but maybe also, having you been commenting on other's work?
Ladderwords
16 years 2 months ago
Yay having internet again.