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Having Sex Above Her Head

piano notes

mother plays
midsummer’s wedding march

measures lap him
as he lays a girl on fire
just above the piano

climax meets the chord
he thrust to rhythm
mom’s playing

spent she didn’t hear
the song

post coitus he amused 

a piece pre eternity
performed in tempo
to his tryst on 

a guillotine 

only two weeks
till fleeing the
country 

— Ladderwords, Feb 13, 2010

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Region, Country: Jeju, KOR

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

a strange piece, kinda oedipal [appropriate geographically 8) ]

which may explain why it's been neglected for a month, too confronting for many. But it's not just that, not sure what it is, feels perhaps a bit incohesive? I can only suggest you revisit the feelings and thoughts and wonder what you were saying. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible