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Feb 13, 2010
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Tap..tap
Tap, tap…breaks the weary dreamI’ve fought each waking nightof sleep that wanders to its end. Tap, tap…more insistent now,as light seeps past each cautious lidand slowly rouses consciousness. Tap, tap…feathers drum the glasswith urgent lack of etiquette,that peers with beaded eyeand yellow breast into my room….. It seems I’m still alive!Staring at this greeting thrustof life launched at my window-pane.Her knowing, in each darting lookand question-struck, coquettish pose,held, until exploded flightlifts her into a blossomed skybursting with laden plumesof billowing, haloed clouds.Up where sunlight dancesto the vibrant noise of crowded,beating, bodied-wingsfilling each jaded, care-worn sensewith purpose to survive. Still her tap, tap…echoes through my head,and Death will lie untaken by my bed.
— professor, Feb 13, 2010
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magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Wonderful
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Magics
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Big smile BB … love this
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Lil Sis
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Hey Prof, is it Déjà vu or
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Anna
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Oui. C’est toujours
infinite_dwarf
16 years 3 months ago
Keith
professor
16 years 3 months ago
May be you are right Jess about the story
Patricia_legacy
16 years 3 months ago
Even better
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Patricia