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Tap..tap

Tap, tap…breaks the weary dreamI’ve fought each waking nightof sleep that wanders to its end. Tap, tap…more insistent now,as light seeps past each cautious lidand slowly rouses consciousness. Tap, tap…feathers drum the glasswith urgent lack of etiquette,that peers with beaded eyeand yellow breast into my room….. It seems I’m still alive!Staring at this greeting thrustof life launched at my window-pane.Her knowing, in each darting lookand question-struck, coquettish pose,held, until exploded flightlifts her into a blossomed skybursting with laden plumesof billowing, haloed clouds.Up where sunlight dancesto the vibrant noise of crowded,beating, bodied-wingsfilling each jaded, care-worn sensewith purpose to survive. Still her tap, tap…echoes through my head,and Death will lie untaken by my bed.
— professor, Feb 13, 2010

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Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Wonderful

As she taps her way into your soul. This is a lovely most lovely write of your professor may I say so myself. Enjoyed it and would love to hear it in spoken word. Happy Valentine's Day to you Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Magics

and I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day too. I will try to get the recording software reloaded again to do this as spoken word. I had meant to do it several months ago but never got around to it. My best wishes Keith
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Big smile BB … love this

Big smile BB ... love this one cant believe you hadnt posted this before now its really good theres one line thats bothering me let me think on it and I will come to it in the morning love and big hugs lil Isis pmsl
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Lil Sis

Am glad you liked it despite the subject....and you did ask me to post it after all lol. Love and hugs BB
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Anna

Yes you have probably read a version of this several years ago. After a conversatation with JayC about the strange and amazing ways animals respond to human illness I promised her I would re-post this one and I took the opportunity to revise it a little as well. It is a true story from a period when I was quite ill and depressed and this little yellow breasted bird came and tapped on my window every morning until I was awake and for several months. When I was recovered she came on the final morning and seemed to want to introduce me to her mate....who was much more shy and kept his distance lol.. After that i didnt see her again. C'est toujours l'amour, l'amour lol. Keith
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 3 months ago

Keith

Wasn't there a story about a canary or something? Folklore possibly? This poem reminded me of that story, and of the fact that we have two sets of sparrows setting up nests in the eves under the window. Animals do have an incredible ability to sense when something is wrong, and of things to come. The foreshadowing felt as if it were supposed to make the reader uncomfortable - was that intentional? Nice piece, friend. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Life is the sun, and the show must go on and on; make it come true. Life is the sun, and the road goes on and on; paint this song any colour but blue." - Don Ross
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

May be you are right Jess about the story

although this was not a canary, they would't last too long outside in our climate....the miners used to take them down the mines to detect gas for them (by dying!). The poem is not about a comfortable subject so yes it is not intended to be make the reader feel entirely at ease. with my best wishes Keith
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Patricia_legacy

16 years 3 months ago

Even better

Yes, I read this before too. It is even better and I loved it then. Thanks for your great poetry. Pat
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Patricia

Thanks for stopping by. Hope you are well. Yes I changed the ending a little of this poem and I prefer it this way I think. My best wishes Keith