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The Shadows

The shadows spread across
her breastplate made of gold
and darkness subtly swims into the night,

doubt plays with her passions
with a gloom that's sevenfold
and a hazy film attempts to blind her sight.

Pain and aggravation
removes serenity
so her life's blood turns into a muddy stew,

but courage and tenacity
she holds deep in her soul
so there's not a lot the shadows can even do.

The bright sphere that rules the night's
shadowy attempt to teach,
the shadows to destroy and ruin her day,

but, her aura, pure and bright
shines through everything
she knows love and grace, and also how to pray.

Truth be told, life is bold
and passion her ally,
so forever, hers is a Mosaic, fair

a tapestry delight
with the threads all shadow-free
creates a fate that will never, ever tear.
— docmaverick, Feb 13, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 2 months ago

Hey Doc, Well written, I

Hey Doc, Well written, I love the imagery in this, reminds me of a warrior who is a shining light to someone. Only thing I'm not sure of is the title...does it really give hint to the essence of the poem? Loved everything else though. Peace
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dearest Doc

sigh this is beautiful dear man I loved it ... wonderful write made me slide into each and every word .... beautifully done love Jayne-Chloe x x x