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DawningDaytripper
DawningDaytripper
Feb 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dawning Day Trip

Crisp
Damp

A cool Silent suspense
  holding a mystery of anticipation

Eloquence renewed
  dancing an age old welcome

Calling with a tender kiss of promise

Each dawn a daily encore
  overflowing from a wellspring of color

Prayer's painted with-in every moment

Savage souls written in ancient patterns

Feeling
 learning
  each awakening shade

Birthing a regal purple patch
  threaded by Lavender and lilac ribbon's

Ripening like a sweet succulent Plum
 cleansing the pitch of night with Apollo's light  

An ever evolving Blood Mandarin prose
  punctuated delicately with Apricot and Marigold

The Celestial waves of Aqua heralding
 Cerulean and Azure Blessings over the horizon 

Every morning suggesting a golden purpose

Each Dawning offering inspiration
   illuminating a fresh and new Day trip 


Julie

D.D

4/08/2009
— DawningDaytripper, Feb 13, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Loved this one alot

Havent been by in a while and stopped by to visit you again. This is ba very good one of yours probably the best I read yet. Very nice and as you know the dawn and the sunrise is where and when I am the best in my writes. Truly loved id DD magics02 xoxoox
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Magic, This one

Thank you Magic, This one means alot to me. Since it carries my name and all. I just had to repost it to share with every one. Thanks for reading and your kind comments. Julie D.D.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Oh LOOK just look just look at THAT sunrise,

Ann of Norway Oh LOOK just look just look at THAT sunrise, its so dazzling, so full of colours, so brilliantly shining in the whole sky of neopoets blue, its scintillating colours are penetrating each facet of the diamonds of our agate eyes and making us laugh at the beauty of this painting, laughing a laugh of joy. Beautiful dawn today Dawning Daytripper Julie, here the sky is dull, but you have streaked it with lines of poetry in such colours that it glows. And before I wrote this I didn't even see that you had that title so blind here and there sometimes, so you got out of me the very thing you are expressing, wow wonderful you. Love from Ann on Valentine's day
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

What blissful Valentines

What blissful Valentines comment Ann, thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed my Dawning Day trip. I just love it so. Like the dawn I always see something new in it. I have missed it so. Thank you! Julie D.D.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

De Ja Vue Julie ??? lol I

De Ja Vue Julie ??? lol I think I read this one on your old profile ...Beautiful dawning Kind regards Jayne
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Yes Seren, you do recognize

Yes Seren, you do recognize it. I just had to re post it on this profile. I needed to feel the sunrise it contains. Thanks for noticing my dear Jayne. And thank you for your kind comment. Julie D.D.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

The sun did rise...

in this lovely poem. I found myself engrosed in the flow of the poem, brilliant. Happy Valentines Day Rosina xena465
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jt0210

16 years 3 months ago

Hello

All the colours stick out. I'm actually imaging a Beatles song playing in the background or a child finger painting. I picture a kind affectionate photo to a mother stuck to the fridge. Something that a parent will cherish forever, Just those little things that mean a lot. It kind of made my day as I am pretty under the weather and some malicious editor sent me a note saying my work was horrible, completely unprovoked. They are terrible tgey want to kill you before you start. I thought the generic rejection letters were bad but this was cruel. They may not have liked the content of poems but it was uncalled for. Thy are such surface level meaning people you really have to spoonfeed most of them. What I am saying is keep writing and give them hell. JT
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I love the Beatles. I know

I love the Beatles. I know all of there early songs. All of them. A big fan. And I was thinking of fingerpaints when I wrote it, funny things we catch sometimes. JT. My initials are JT to. And editors are not your friend, they have a job to do. And sometimes that job has the appearance of making your life a misearable hell. But with out the process who knows what they might publish. I recommend getting to know some of our authors and asking them for advice. I plan on a stack of rejection letters for a long time before I will accomplish the task. And I haven't even started. I just got my spelling and desire in line, lol! Anyways thanks for reading JT and I am glad you liked it!! Julie D.D.