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MOTHER AND DAUGHTER..
MOTHER AND DAUGHTER
A loving mother with her loving daughter,
Daughter named Jade, how God had made
No other love then a mother with daughter
Nothing to compare, so much they share
Words in a spelling bee, the words of a poem
there's no other place, then the place called home.
Spelling and rhyming their beautiful tune
bright is the light of their very first moon.
Stand proud and tall for what you have
the love of each other, forever, so glad
No other love then a mother and daughter
There's nothing else, to compare
Growing together year after year
The teachings to be taught,
Can not be bought,
The lessons she has learned
for all for which she yearns
For her mother was there, right by her side
Coaching her on, twinkling in her eyes.
There is no other love, more precious and true
For Jade and Mom the love between the two.
Hold on to your Mother
Hold on to your Daughter
The love they share year after year.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Thanking you Lovely and Seren
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Jade in Aussie land
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
No Lyz’s daughter from
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
lmao
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Omg Annie has a Jade as well
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Great
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Trents just turned 21 a
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
I see now
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Noooo sleep for me tonight
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Annie
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Lucky Jade..
Stefan
16 years 3 months ago
Hi
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Stef
Stefan
16 years 3 months ago
Hi
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
with the hand on this hip and the water on the ground??
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Focus now...the poem
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
I thank you Seabhac
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Happy Valentines
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
The same to you Xena
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I love this site - all the
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
This was for Annie and Jade
Dustyverse
16 years 3 months ago
loved it!!