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MOTHER AND DAUGHTER..

 

MOTHER AND DAUGHTER


 

A loving mother with her loving daughter,
Daughter named Jade, how God had made
No other love then a mother with daughter
Nothing to compare, so much they share


 

Words in a spelling bee, the words of a poem
there's no other place, then the place called home.
Spelling and rhyming their beautiful tune
bright is the light of their very first moon.


 

Stand proud and tall for what you have
the love of each other, forever, so glad
No other love then a mother and  daughter
There's nothing else, to compare
Growing together year after year

The teachings to be  taught,
Can not be bought,
The lessons she has learned
for all for which she yearns
For her mother was there, right by her side
Coaching her on,  twinkling in her eyes.


 


There is no other love,  more precious and true
For Jade and Mom the love between the two.
Hold on to your Mother
Hold on to your Daughter

There's nothing else to compare
The love they share year after year.
— magics02, Feb 12, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

You know Jades having my nephews baby lol ;) wonderful write I am sure she will love it .... love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thanking you Lovely and Seren

I had to go back to this one several times, tweak, tweak and more tweak. Now I will probably go back again. I am glad you liked it Lovely as also Seren. This could be written for all the moms and daughters out there. Just take out the name and enter the name you choose and you could make it special to you and her also. Jade now keep those words going And Mom you keep the poems coming Love to you both xoxoxoxo Magics02
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

just thought I would let you know Jade was just here for a visit and I showed her your poem she loved it ... big smile love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Jade in Aussie land

Do you have a daughter named Jade too. Did you see where I tweaked it again, something makes me go back and tweak tweak as I feel it calling to me. love ya gal magics02
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

No Lyz’s daughter from

No Lyz's(neopoet Lyz) well her daughter is having a baby with my Nephew lol ... Jade is her daughter ... I mistakenly thought you wrote it for them ... much love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

lmao

I thought something was up but guess what it's write is for all the mothers and daughters with Annie and Jade the tribute and poem written for them. It is quite okay and I am glad that Jade from Aussie land is a loving it too!!! xooxo magics
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Omg Annie has a Jade as well

Omg Annie has a Jade as well ... didnt know that, well I do now lol ... my daughter is named Bethany and my sons Trent Jacob and Brock ;) love and hugs Jayne x x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Great

My son is Joey or Joseph or sometimes we call him Jo-Jo. He is 17 and how old are your childrens? It is cold and gloomy here today, time to get my tap shoes out.. Hope your doing better my aussie gal Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Trents just turned 21 a

Trents just turned 21 a couple of months ago and jake turned 19 last month ... Bethany is 17 in a couple of months and Brock 16 ... you can have some of this heat its half midnight here and its still boiling hot ... I am not too bad hun thanks for asking you take care and get those tap shoes out and warm up lol love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

I see now

You have a home of teens my my lol and I know how that is even though I only have one and I love him to death. Go get some rest and sure would be nice to be in pool with the lime and the coco nuts. Love ya my lady friend Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Noooo sleep for me tonight

Noooo sleep for me tonight lol I wish but yeah its gonna be a long one I am just going to see if I can finish a poem and post it later love you to mona take care huni love Jayne-Chloe x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Annie

Lyz's daughter and my Nephew BJ are having a baby she will be the babies Nana and I will be the great aunt lol ... so yes we will always be family by a birth I guess you could say ... I will tell her shes missed Jade said shes not been well and with her friends passing shes taken it hard ... I will send your love to her and let her know shes missed will give her a ring tomorrow ;) see how shes doing been a couple of weeks since I spoke to her love and big hugs Jayne x x
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Lucky Jade..

never had children but I can see that you love her very much. Just lovely. Rosina xena465
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Stefan

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

great poem, deep emotional and strong.
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you Stef

Yes I was doing my deep thinking LOL and hope to talk to you later here. Have a great day today and which one is you in the pic? love magics02 xoxoxo
S

Stefan

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

the man...........
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

with the hand on this hip and the water on the ground??

LOL I did not know this but now I do and nice of you. Now you need to take the front pic. I have to get mine on here too somehow I tried and need to try again, in hopes no one will shoot darks or ammos at me LOL had fun in chat last nite ad glad you came in!! Happy Valentines Day to you and your lovely one! Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Focus now...the poem

Sorry got lost in all the inter relationships here across the world...fascinating. I like the poem and love the intent, se what you have sparked with your words and given life to. Best Wishes Seabhac
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

I thank you Seabhac

Yes sometimes I write as I sit here and type it all just comes out. I have a couple of journals with all my earlier writes but have not put them on here as we can only submit one a day. And then of course there is overload. Have a Happy Valentines Day to you and your. Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Happy Valentines

Happy Valentines Day Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

The same to you Xena

I hope your day is bright and loving just like you!! Love, Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

I love this site - all the

I love this site - all the communications possible. Love your poem too Magics. I had boys - two - and know the the strength of love between mother and son, but I've watched and heard mothers with their daughters and see that it a very different relationship. lol Judy
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

This was for Annie and Jade

Hello missed seeing you around here. I see alot to catch up with LOL and off to work I go will talk later and thank you for all the visits. I wrote this one just for Lovely and then it could be for many other mothers and daughters also. I will talk to you later my friend, you take care. Love, Magics02 xoxoxo "Determination Brings Success"
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Dustyverse

16 years 3 months ago

loved it!!

You speak for a lot of us with this beautiful piece!! Mother daughter love is universal to all and unique to each of us at the same time...you capture that here!! Wonderfully!! WELL-DONE!! Love D