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THE FADED JADED LADY
The telphone
death knell it rang and rang and rang
no answer came
what was her name
how did she fare
in life
what colour was her hair,
the knife she used had red
a handle red
the tablecloth a dirty grey
her cigarrettes lay twenty
every day
her hair I said what was it
green
no that would have been too rare
perhaps a blond
but just because she bleached it out
for real
her nails ah those were talons long
she couldn't do her buttons up
with those
her toes were also purple blue
they used to stand out from her shoe
a strap across her ankle
black
her bra too was that
her face with painted lips of red
their dreaded puff of smoke escape
even the smoke was glad to leave
this human chimney
join the breeze
pollute
her breasts were flat but hush
she had a bust so big and proud
all false of course
her thighs were buxom
bonny perhaps
in eyes of men and boys,
her arms they sported bangles
all colours, some stuck high up
her lashes,
I jump about
as she did
that too and I couldn't make out
the whole of her at once
as she flounced along the street
with the famous wobbling feet
and that bottom-swing so fetching
those wretches in the mall
they eyed her every part
not looking for her heart
instead
well better not be said
her fart propelled her gait
its camouflaged smoke trail
described a tail
her hats and things like that
were sky-bosh
crumpled flattened by her piles of clothes
at night
a sight she made
if all be told
for man and child
their heads would turn and stare
how could she even dare to wear those holey tights
with mini skirts that soon rode up
her underthings revealed
no not concealed a drop of her
the tops near reaching her nipples
her gaze gave her feelings
sad
despite her glad smile boldly given
I wonder if there are such in heaven
she might think so
I don't know
we all become like driven snow
old age bleached and faded
gently soft and jaded
into our decline
until we stagger one last try to live it up
and cry our dismal tears
at time its clock
that ticks and ticks
until it stops.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
There’s always one of
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Painted ladies...
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of NorwayYes in some
bjp
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Margaret Ann,
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Out of the closet!!!! Yoiks! I'm no .......
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Laughing and loving it Ann,
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
Good write, honest