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Moth on a Thistle

Moth on The Thistle….

A moth lands upon a lone Scots thistle,
then flits across the open field.
Can you not hear the robin’s pure whistle,
sound carries, across their shield.

But still is my heart, so quiet is the land,
hush and hear brave men that fell.
A country apart, with wars badly planned,
truths that only they should tell.

Spoken in whispers, men are deceased,
swords lie rusting on bloody green grass.
Free now are they from the warring beast,
wind blows, withered leaves rustle past.

That morn they had stood free upon the rise,
all brave men but still some uncertain.
Heavy their hearts and sad their eyes,
that men they’d fight, could wear tartan.

No Trojan horse needed to enter a Scots gate,
just simplest gold coin of the realm.
Curse all the lairds who’d played with men’s fate,
not long should they live at our helm.

The story told is old now,
but scars heal very slow

 

— Roscoe Lane, Feb 11, 2010

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

From a Glasgow lass...

Pure magic. I love this poem. With all the wars going on around the world people tend to forget the wars that we Scots faught to bring peace to our lands. Excellently written. A wee scottish lassie Rosina xena465
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 3 months ago

cheers Rosina

Cheers Rosina, I remember the first time at Culloden, I stood in the Scots ranks. And then i walked across to the English ranks, seeing the names of the clans that fought against Scotland. It gave me a great feeling of hopelessness, that this would have happened. We have always been a proud nation, but this must have been a dark time. Thank you, Regards Roscoe..
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Happy Valentines

Happy Valentines Day Rosina xena465