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Feb 11, 2010
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No Deal
I could sit and piss and moan I guess,
and you would expectthey will expect some groaning but I cant and I wontcause i have better things to dowith something as precious as time,you want me to lay down and dieagain and again but I wont and cantbecause pure stubbornnessdrives me to succeed you will never get what you want by default maybe but not because I let it
and you would expectthey will expect some groaning but I cant and I wontcause i have better things to dowith something as precious as time,you want me to lay down and dieagain and again but I wont and cantbecause pure stubbornnessdrives me to succeed you will never get what you want by default maybe but not because I let it
— Seren, Feb 11, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 3 months ago
LOL no comment love hubby x
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Smart man lol love you Wifey
Victorclaude
16 years 3 months ago
“I could sit and piss and
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Victor
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Hey Janie, to whom doth you
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Mum
Neonfilm
16 years 3 months ago
Exactly, exactly. Straight
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Neon
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Reminded me of...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Gee
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of NorwayYou know the
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest Ann
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Jayne:
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Hugo
Stefan
16 years 3 months ago
Hi
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Stefan
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Annie
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
loving the gritty first
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Vix
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
lmao to, bless you, ramble