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Feb 08, 2010
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Vietnam
Red dragons' gaping jaws
pouring, surfing his breath
tiger silk butterflies
splitting open my sky wide,
hard velvet beating wings
that spit,sizzle,hiss
casting barbed silk welts
omitting his lightening
jagged bolts fierce orange
fluttering, flapping their frenzy of heat
against the colbat blue
of my calm,
whipping, stalking my eyes
afore taking flight
forcing rapid blink to wince
at their painful beauty.
all breath caught,
stuck in the lungs that
beat in rhythm with the tiger wings
That red dragon
made of wood
paint peeling
roars and thunders
claws atapping on the varnished floor boards
thick hind legs sliding on the polished beams
scrabbling to catch
the snipers
snip snip snipping
the old hut
chunks make teeth of the roof and door
eye spy
pass the parcel
blow it piece by piece
catch a glimpse of me
running
room to room
trying to catch the dragons tiger
dodge the jungle hiders blades.
sharp tainted purple mists
penetrate the sepia skies
cameo bayonets hack that ladder
seams of skin unravel
stitched open in tremors of BZ
fortified in eyes that view no pretty illusions
frenzied whir of green and red meet
the dust
gentleing my fall to final softness
pouring, surfing his breath
tiger silk butterflies
splitting open my sky wide,
hard velvet beating wings
that spit,sizzle,hiss
casting barbed silk welts
omitting his lightening
jagged bolts fierce orange
fluttering, flapping their frenzy of heat
against the colbat blue
of my calm,
whipping, stalking my eyes
afore taking flight
forcing rapid blink to wince
at their painful beauty.
all breath caught,
stuck in the lungs that
beat in rhythm with the tiger wings
That red dragon
made of wood
paint peeling
roars and thunders
claws atapping on the varnished floor boards
thick hind legs sliding on the polished beams
scrabbling to catch
the snipers
snip snip snipping
the old hut
chunks make teeth of the roof and door
eye spy
pass the parcel
blow it piece by piece
catch a glimpse of me
running
room to room
trying to catch the dragons tiger
dodge the jungle hiders blades.
sharp tainted purple mists
penetrate the sepia skies
cameo bayonets hack that ladder
seams of skin unravel
stitched open in tremors of BZ
fortified in eyes that view no pretty illusions
frenzied whir of green and red meet
the dust
gentleing my fall to final softness
Comments
Lonnie
16 years 3 months ago
Kind of a must read for me!
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Hey lonnienot having
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Great...
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks, i’ve just updated
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Not at all...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Vix
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks JC lol, i hope you