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Gold rush

Old man on the River
hunched to his task
panning for a sliver
to fill his flask

A flake of gold
in so much pyrite
he's feeling so old
lookin' quit the sight

He started in the wild
paving the first trails
he had a pan and a fire
a wife waitin' for mail

He had not to loose
in a game of chance
we don’t pick or choose
thrills salty romance

Rolling the dice
on a rocky claim
with a will of ice
in a world yet tame

His life went to booze
with dirt stained pants
widower twice over
a miner's sad dance

Gold in his veins
prayer in his heart
we have forgot name
but remember his part

 

Julie

D.D.

2/11/2010

— DawningDaytripper, Feb 11, 2010

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

A sad case...

A sad case of gambling, drinking and wasting away a life though to be lost already. Very good Rosina xena465
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Hemm… that is how it reads

Hemm... that is how it reads isn't Rosina, Well that was half what I was going for. I guess its not done yet. I will try to add what it needs to complete it. Thanks for the read and comments. Very valuable. Julie D.D.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

I am...

Waiting for the rest of it, to give you the rest of the stars. I like where I think this is going. Higgest bugs, and lots of love, ~ Gee