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Feb 11, 2010
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Gold rush
Old man on the River
hunched to his task
panning for a sliver
to fill his flask
A flake of gold
in so much pyrite
he's feeling so old
lookin' quit the sight
He started in the wild
paving the first trails
he had a pan and a fire
a wife waitin' for mail
He had not to loose
in a game of chance
we don’t pick or choose
thrills salty romance
Rolling the dice
on a rocky claim
with a will of ice
in a world yet tame
His life went to booze
with dirt stained pants
widower twice over
a miner's sad dance
Gold in his veins
prayer in his heart
we have forgot name
but remember his part
Julie
D.D.
2/11/2010
— DawningDaytripper, Feb 11, 2010
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xena465
16 years 3 months ago
A sad case...
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Hemm… that is how it reads
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
I am...
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
I should be finishing it