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Feb 11, 2010
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Anxiety
I awake to the ocean at my side
Standing, I clean the sand from my shirt
Looking out into the sea, it is as flat as anything I have ever seen
Before me stands a sight, The Sun has crashed into the sea
It is slowly sinking.
White horses dance in the distance
The wind is silent and I hear children sing
It is snowing ashes of the world i used to live in
Behind me stands the world, it has become a ruin
It is slowly dying.
Help me to carry the water
We can dance on the coals of the sun.
— washing tears, Feb 11, 2010
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xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Anxiety...
washing tears
16 years 3 months ago
well thank you!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Happy Valentines