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Hearty Meal...
Eyes searching for that Killer smile
Surprised by his gentle touch
No one else hears his voice
His gift is just too much
He has done it once again
Brought a prize for her to share
A glimpse of ankle clad in sneaker
Just to say he cares
Let's go home to prepare our dinner
I got him just for you, my sweet
Picked him up from our good friend
Thought he'd be good to eat
The loft was decked with hearts
And there were candles all alite
I had to hurry, it was late
But it is... a special nite
They made gravy and galumpkies
Had eyeballs dipped in sauce
Crunched shredded fried fingers
And had seconds just because
The cassarole was bits of skin
Mixed with red potatoes and chive
Goat's cheese spread o'er all
Now the moment had arrived
Dessert... was smooth and chocolatey
A delight, made with loving hands
The heart was covered with cocao
Almost too much to stand
As he sipped the wine named Embalming
After a most fantastic meal
He began to think of other things
What he had begun to feel
As she slid across the table
On her hands and knees
He picked her up and went upstairs
When she kissed him, and said Please
Hard lovin' was in order
To make the nite complete
They twisted up the blankets
They sweated on the sheets
Ferocious and full of passion
They threw away the book
He was so very happy
She was loving her best cook
Critiques
hardcorechick28
16 years 3 months ago
that was AWESOME
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
You and DeMona...
hardcorechick28
16 years 3 months ago
i am glad
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
A killer Valentines day ….
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
I know...
hardcorechick28
16 years 3 months ago
Got to love
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
I loved this Gee, Killer
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Killer is...