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Hearty Meal...

Eyes searching for that Killer smile

Surprised by his gentle touch

No one else hears his voice

His gift is just too much

He has done it once again

Brought a prize for her to share

A glimpse of ankle clad in sneaker

Just to say he cares

Let's go home to prepare our dinner

I got him just for you, my sweet

Picked him up from our good friend

Thought he'd be good to eat

The loft was decked with hearts

And there were candles all alite

I had to hurry, it was late

But it is... a special nite

They made gravy and galumpkies

Had eyeballs dipped in sauce

Crunched shredded fried fingers

And had seconds just because

The cassarole was bits of skin

Mixed with red potatoes and chive

Goat's cheese spread o'er all

Now the moment had arrived

Dessert... was smooth and chocolatey

A delight, made with loving hands

The heart was covered with cocao

Almost too much to stand

As he sipped the wine named Embalming

After a most fantastic meal

He began to think of other things

What he had begun to feel

As she slid across the table

On her hands and knees

He picked her up and went upstairs

When she kissed him, and said Please

Hard lovin' was in order

To make the nite complete

They twisted up the blankets

They sweated on the sheets

Ferocious and full of passion

They threw away the book

He was so very happy

She was loving her best cook

 

 

 

 

— Geezer, Feb 11, 2010

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

that was AWESOME

so much better than mine!!!!!! Killer and DeMona make such a great couple!!!! I am so excited to see what is in store for them next!!!!
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

You and DeMona...

Were and are my inspiration. Without you two, there wouldn't a Valentine's Day celebration for Killer! It would be a depressing day for him. It is so much better to have something and someone to look forward to. Even for Killer! ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

i am glad

we could be of inspiration to you!!! You and Killer are inspirations to us as well. Killer has made DeMona almost human and you have made me a better writer :). It is nice to have someone to bounce ideas off of and watch them grow as Killer and DeMona have (as individual characters and as a couple). They really started from the same place, more creature like than human and have evolved into functioning adults (maybe I should say dysfunctional adults). Without Killer, DeMona would still be a Vampire Tramp and without you, I would still be trying to figure out how to make my writing sound good :).....
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

I know...

That Killer is hard to take at times, but he does have a certain savoir-faire, you must admit. LOL. and a sense of humour too! Thanks hun, Higgest bugs and lotta love, ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 3 months ago

Got to love

Killer's sense of humor. As I keep saying, he is a man after my own heart!!!! I could find so many uses for him in my every day life...so many people for him to visit!!!! Cant wait to see whats next
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I loved this Gee, Killer

I loved this Gee, Killer rocks. I was with you the whole way till the last 3 lines. And I am not qualified to suggest, but I am going to give it a shot, or a nudge to you for inspiration. "They threw away the book He was so very happy She was loving her best cook" =They rewrote a primal book giving the bed a good thrashin throwing eachother knowing looks refueling Killers croocked passion= Just a thought. I loved the read Gee, Julie D.D.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Killer is...

Sir Gee's alter ego. He takes care of the things and people that piss me off. He started out being a supernatural being, but slowly has morphed into an almost normal human being. He has superior strength and reflexes, but can be hurt. Galumpkies are a Polish dish that is cabbage stuffed with hambuger, onions, and spices. Love ya,NW. ~ Gee