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Stuart Reiss
Feb 06, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Entangled Desire

A tender touch of gifted hand
My unique mind you understand
Your love filled eyes, your silken hair
Skin milky white of one so fair

Disrobed and free you stand alone
Time for you to guide me home
Whisper now to me sweet muse
For nothing now will I refuse

Lips locked on skin near Cupids sign
Oh gorgeous taste of passions wine
Her scented body I've come to crave
My seed for her I now do save

I rush head long for your deep well
The water's warm, for you I fell
We are now one, pure feel of skin
You steal a kiss and ride me in

Exhausted, spent I gaze at you
A loving sleep of ecstasy's dew
For now I know your deepest desire
To entangle ourselves in loves great fire


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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Such passion...

Whose the lucky lady? It would be nice if someone wrote a poem like that for me. I guess those days are long gone. But for you, keep the passion alive. It's good for the soul and of course your talent for poetry. Beautiful Stuart Rosina xena
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Ahh the lucky lady….I

Ahh the lucky lady.... I guess that's the eternal question although I'm thinking of one lady who would enjoy this poem very much! Your right It does the soul wonders... Thankyou so much Rosina for taking the time to read my poem Best regards Stu :-)
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Happy Valentines

Happy Valentines Day Rosina xena465
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

STU of Art you make a work of art as a love poem

STU of Art you make a work of art as a love poem this is good. Just a few quibbles:- "for you I’ve fell"..............this is better without the I've, just I will do? "Exhausted and spent I gaze at you".........do you need the AND? a comma is less of a hindrance in the flow! I like this a lot and send my love as confirmation of the fact, Ann of Norway. I put the stars in anticipation!
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Ahhh Ann,,,lovely

Ahhh Ann,,,lovely suggestions ... I do agree that they work much better and have tweeked it to reflect that..Thankyou :-) I so love Neo and its people...Your confirmation of that fact as well as the other lovely people in here willing to help.. Best regards Stuart :-)
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hillrider

16 years 3 months ago

Rhyme and meter

Are excellent Stu. And since the ladies have commented on the content I am free to politely read it and move along. 8) Great write, will return when I am able and read more of what is here. Indi
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Hey thanks Indi… I really

Hey thanks Indi... I really love poems that rhyme but not forced or tacky but of a free flowing easy nature...Thanks heaps for taking the time to read my poem!! Best regards Stu :-)
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raskin

16 years 3 months ago

Well done romantic poem, I

Well done romantic poem, I agree with Indi on the rhyme and meter. Enjoyed reading. raskin
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

for the love of romantic poetry

Hey thanks Raskin... Really loved to write this and even half way through I was liking the direction. Truth be told I wrote a similar poem the night prior and had it all set to upload and somehow lost it!!!! Wasnt happy but then got over it in a heartbeat because thats life my friend. Anyway a nice poem came out none the less even though its a different one lol Best regards Stu :-)
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 3 months ago

Entangled Desire

Stuart How you rekindled of what once was. Only to long for again. To be the lady of the day and night just for my king. Just love this my friend Electric Blue
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Just love to rekindle

Rekindle...maybe from a past life long gone or distant memory of something much greater beyond words or concious thought perhaps... Really glad you liked it ElectricBlue Best regards Stu :-)
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 3 months ago

wow

This one stood out and left me breathless! I loved it. In Total Awe, Greeneyes
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Its so amazing that simple

Its so amazing that simple words arranged in a particular manner can become something of their very own... Thanks so much for reading my little poem Greeneyes Best regards Stu :-)
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hello Stuart

I loved everything about this poem. You are a romantic at heart. My favorite lines are: I rush head long for your deep well The water’s warm, for you I fell We are now one, pure feel of skin You steal a kiss and ride me in Always, Cat