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Feb 09, 2010
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Still collecting data
Still collecting data
I feel like one of Pollock's
splattered paintings, over-painted
here and there to make up a composite
whole, laughingly so
Or a dusty pyramid standing in
the same place for thousands of
years, brutalized by sand storms
and heat from the sun
A telephone ringing in an empty
house
that will
never be answered
An ancient dream,
dreamer has
not yet awakened
from
Crisscrossing railroad
tracks
deciding which
way to go
Silver lining
of a grey cloud
hovering, dissipating
over green prairie
The unfinished
experiment
still collecting
data.
vcp
23 January 2010
— Victorclaude, Feb 09, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Another Victor Claude poem