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A story untold.


                    A story untold.

 

The small crowd mingled

Around the slight figure crumpled

On the edge of the busy main road

Just under the street name board.

 

Though the city streets were full of those

Who lost their way, their house, and spouse.

But she was different in some way

A few hearts, her looks can still sway.

 

She looked weak, but not unhealthy

Achingly attractive but very, very dirty.

Once a blooming rose, fast losing its glow

Unknown to herself she was on the show.

 

Some sighed by acting pity

Some looked with genuine sympathy,

A few letched at her slim line

And quite a few suspected of her some crime.

 

Unaware of the highway din

Neither fully awake not sleeping,

A forsaken child of mankind

For the world around, she was blind.

 

A security man poked her with cane

Shouted at her to get lost in the by lane,

Bringing her back to her life

Forcing her to face her grief.

 

She opened her eyes with great effort

Clear brown eyes confused and hurt,

She moved her hand searching for hold

Groping thin air for some support.

 

A senior citizen steeped forward

Self conscious, hesitant and awkward,

To help, he tried to hold her hand

She recoiled and threw on him, some sand.

A brief fire burned in her eyes

Like strike of lightning in the dark skies.

Her lips twisted and she cried foul

Bleeding words came out of her wounded soul.

 

She stood up with slow grace

Dark emotions written large on her face,

Gingerly turned back and left the road

Taking back with her a story untold.

 

By;-

Milton Roy ‘Rahbar’

 

 

This is a depiction of a real life incident witnessed

on the streets of Mumbai.

 

 

 


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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

I love the very old (and

I love the very old (and newer) films of Satyajit Ray and Deppa Mehta esp. the more recent Water, Fire and Earth series. Your poem is very reminiscent. Thank you. ~A
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rahbar

16 years 3 months ago

I love the storied you love.

Hello Kailash...you are so much right...those stories and their picturization were quite heart touching...I am happy you like this poem. thanks for your comment. Rahbar.
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hippiepoet69

16 years 3 months ago

thumbs up

I do not use stars. Your title caught my eyes. I've got a few true stories this poem brings back. One was where a young woman ran into a busy intersection. It was raining, I was stoped at the light. There was a van to my left. The light changed. I took off and the van to my left did a panic stop. I didn't know what was happing so I slamed on my brakes. Then a girl was barely missed by the van. My brakes were locked up but I slid into her knoking her down. She got right up and ran throught a parking lot. I pulled into the lot and she kept running. She told me she was OK. But I could tell she was scared. Your poem stirred emotions in me. That is a good poem to me. I enjoyed it. Keep writting and enjoy. huey
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rahbar

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS FOR SHARING...

Hello Huey...thanks again for sharing your wonderful experience with me...some of these incidents become part of us....till the very end. Rahbar.
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

a part of me

Yes they do become part of you. There was one that still haunts me. I should try writting about it. But you have already used the best title for it. LOL. Take Care Rahbar. huey
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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

16 years 2 months ago

A Story Untold

This is an excellent write Rahbar, coming out of your compassionate pen - a beautifully rhyming poem. I admire your talent. -Mohammad "There is always room on the top, but there is no lift. You have to struggle"