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Someone Like Me

Small petite, three feet tall,

I’m different, like an alien.

Sitting in the corner alone,

not ever needing a companion.

 

My primary days calamitous,

someone like me felt only derision.

Shabby was my attire,

life was taut with collision.

 

Opposing the bullies was fruitless.

I was only fraught with another blow.

Curled in a ball like a hedgehog,

`why they do it`? I don’t know.

 

If only I had been a hedgehog,

I could’ve speared them with a spine.

But, for someone like me,

it was an ant-hill I couldn’t climb.

 

The effects of brutish cruelty,

the bullies created a mouse.

Never to stand tall in the world,

my sanctuary is an empty house.

 

What love I have and share with the living,

their death leaves me uncontrollable.

For someone like me,

their loss is, inconsolable.

 

 

 
— xena465, Feb 09, 2010

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Stefan

16 years 4 months ago

HI

wow, this is a great poem. how many of humanity goes through this. You have the ability to paint with words. GREAT
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Oh! Thank you Stefan...

What a lovely, welcomed, inspiring comment, the best ever. Rosina xena465
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Xena:

Excellent poem, full of sentimental value, imbued with the voice of universal feelings of loss and loneliness. This poem has a very inspirational quality and I bet it's going to be a favorite. Thanks for sharing. I really like it. Sincerely, Hugo
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

I'm hoping...

Thanks a lot Hugo. I hope it gets some more views. It's true to life and it's about my own experiences and I know many others have suffered as a result of being too nice, ignorant, and quiet as a child. You know the bullies, the terrible advandages sick adults take to molest and hurt childlen. It's a story about child to adulthood and the effect it can have in the present. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

The Lovely Alien

You are far from an ALien you are a wonderful comet in the sky Xena. Very good poem I enjoyed it very much. magics02
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Ta so much...

You're magic. Thanks for the lovely comment. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

The Lovely Alien

You are far from an ALien you are a wonderful comet in the sky Xena. Very good poem I enjoyed it very much. magics02
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

I should have known

It only hurts for a bit, that I could have fought back - and I did, eventually. I don't view you as that hedgehod, Xena. You are so much more than that poor dumb animal that waddles out into new territory nieve to be confronted with a tractor. There is no hope in that.. I like how you write about what is three feet tall ;) not needing a companion (then) but we all know people need people yes? If I were to say anything it would be about rhythm. Yours, Mark "some things change, some things do not"
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Three feet tall...

I was referring to my first memory of my life, being 6 years old. I always felt out of place and was very shy. And as I was growing up the shyness brought me all sorts of problems communicating and making friends and the friends that I did make were the ones that hurt me. I was beaten every day, by boys, in primary school and would curl up into a ball to protect my face. When I went to secondary school I fought back and became wild for a time, which, all in all, maped out the rest of my life. More downs than ups, so to speak. Thanks for your much appreciated comment. I hope this explaination help with the rhythm of the poem. If not I'd appreciate any help to improve this poem. Thanks Rosina xena465
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

me

I would leave out "death leaves me" (keep the rest of that line) for rhythm. Mark "some things change, some things do not"
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

You're right Mark...

I didn't expain that stanza properly. I'll change it. Death was meant to mean when I lose a friend, family or pet, when they die, I take it very badly, so much so that I hide myself away from the world for many days...phone off the hook, don't want to see, talk to anyone etc. And I cry so much that my face bloats and my eyes are so swollen that I look like an alien. Rosina xena465
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sharon-rose

16 years 4 months ago

Moved to tears

What a profound piece of work.Your poem moved me to tears,and is relevant to so many others who may have gone through similar experiences.Please write more.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you so much...

Do you think I should add a couple of verses about the teenager or compose another poem entirely about the effects of teenager to adulthood? Rosina xena465
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 3 months ago

Someone Like me

Rosina This is really good therapy facing the issues even now but still doubting yourself. My friend you have come a long way. You are moving forward. Yes I know the past has the habit of returning in dreams and memories but my dear friend Make new dreams make new memories Great write Electric Blue
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is my first new poem...

All my poems are re-writes. This one is the first one I've written in five years. The title came into my head when I awoke the other day and decided to write from the title and this is what I came up with. Thanks for reading and commenting on it my friend Rosina xena465
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

You bet Annie...

My friend throughout all my days with Neopoet. You can be my sister anytime. I've just posted today a tribute to my sister's death, 6 years ago now on the 1st March 05. I miss her just like it was only yesterday that I got the call that she was gone. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

time heals

its all behind ur mind by now how time heals you know that well how time conceals we all now know too lovey poetry 3 feet???
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Loved

I recieved your comment at the same time as you PM. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

nice

at least ur poem came alive again gr88888888888888 loved
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Yes it did

Yes it did Loved...thanks. Rosina xena465
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

someone like me

Rosina Try and stay strong we are here for you. There will be times we are against the whole world and a little mouse we become and hide away. But then we get stronger little by little and become a bold knight with armour worn and sword by your side. Thinking about you my friend. I know this place well always Blue
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Maggie

I know you understand this poem very well. It's really great to have you back with us. Rosina xena465