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Someone Like Me
Small petite, three feet tall,
I’m different, like an alien.
Sitting in the corner alone,
not ever needing a companion.
My primary days calamitous,
someone like me felt only derision.
Shabby was my attire,
life was taut with collision.
Opposing the bullies was fruitless.
I was only fraught with another blow.
Curled in a ball like a hedgehog,
`why they do it`? I don’t know.
If only I had been a hedgehog,
I could’ve speared them with a spine.
But, for someone like me,
it was an ant-hill I couldn’t climb.
The effects of brutish cruelty,
the bullies created a mouse.
Never to stand tall in the world,
my sanctuary is an empty house.
What love I have and share with the living,
their death leaves me uncontrollable.
For someone like me,
their loss is, inconsolable.
Critiques
Stefan
16 years 4 months ago
HI
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Oh! Thank you Stefan...
hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Xena:
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
I'm hoping...
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
The Lovely Alien
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Ta so much...
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
The Lovely Alien
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
I should have known
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Three feet tall...
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
me
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You're right Mark...
sharon-rose
16 years 4 months ago
Moved to tears
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much...
Electric Blue
16 years 3 months ago
Someone Like me
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
This is my first new poem...
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You bet Annie...
loved
16 years 1 month ago
time heals
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Loved
loved
16 years 1 month ago
nice
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Yes it did
Electric Blue
16 years 1 month ago
someone like me
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Maggie