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Syncopated Rhythm

Gravity has found favor
with the skeletal remains

of one who found "folly"
a suitable way of life.

Gone, from my horizons
are the dues that must be paid,

for the ledger has been balanced
and the air is breathable, once again.

Your sunlight overlooks the shadows
that have occupied my heart,

and lights for me, the pathway home
towards our syncopated rhythm;

for, still...was this heartbeat, that was mine
forever silenced by time's shadows,

until you taught it to steadily keep pace with my thoughts,
which, according to you.....are limited only by my imagination.




— docmaverick, Feb 08, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 4 months ago

This is a beautiful description of one ......

Who is at peace with one's self and is happy, which in turn makes me happy to know you are content....may life always bring you these blessings....my wish for you Doc Maverick....Antoinette Mari P.S. Also an excellent write.....per usual my talented son...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 3 months ago

Thanx, Antoinette....

...I'm seeing stars ! Seriously, thank-you, Mom. That means a lot. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.