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Feb 08, 2010
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THE SAME FRONT DOOR
THE SAME FRONT DOOR
The heat of my feelings,
The fire in the light
Ignites all my being tonight,
The embers discarded
From yesterdays tears,
Make up for the sadness
Of all bygone fears;
Your new vision shines
In the skies of my mind,
I’ll fly with you, die with you,
Leave grief behind,
My life now made clear as the sun
Takes impetus you have begun,
As I stride over pain,
And dance once again,
In a waltz round and round
Never touching the ground,
Yes you’ve won.
My life’s not my own any more,
As we now have the same front door.
— Nordic cloud, Feb 08, 2010
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Critiques
raskin
16 years 4 months ago
New beginnings, lovely. Nice
the_fool
16 years 4 months ago
could use just a little more
hippiepoet69
16 years 4 months ago
Thumbs up
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Yes we do don't we Rosina
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Happy Valentines
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
I loved it Ann, Gorgous and
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Dearest serene Jayne, you always make me feel good too,
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Ann, I don’t usually go
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
When a poem is written by someone 'in love'