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Feb 08, 2010
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Ludicrous ~ An Acrostic
L etting all the foul air out
U nder-mines the abstraction principle (or the principal attraction)
D etour-mined (or deter-mind) to dislocate and fragmentate whether or not it is noble to
I nvolve the primordial dissonance, a
C risis intervention sometimes withholds (with old) crucial evidence
R easoning abstained obtains a black eye
O ut. Three strikes. Ten-count.
U sually.
S ituation Normal, All-Fucked-Up
U nder-mines the abstraction principle (or the principal attraction)
D etour-mined (or deter-mind) to dislocate and fragmentate whether or not it is noble to
I nvolve the primordial dissonance, a
C risis intervention sometimes withholds (with old) crucial evidence
R easoning abstained obtains a black eye
O ut. Three strikes. Ten-count.
U sually.
S ituation Normal, All-Fucked-Up
— Kailashana, Feb 08, 2010
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Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
This is a Gem indeed!
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Glad you liked it Lonnie,
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Oh terrific Anna it is so
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Hey sis, then try an
RobertKnott
16 years 4 months ago
Hmmmmmm...
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Quantum mechanics: in the