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A one time Tribute
A one time tribute
Once you were kind enough
To comment only on my poetry
You gave me the heavenly kick
That anyone could see
Now it’s the first poem of yours
I happen ed to read
What is poetry?
Only you know indeed.
I am a simple passer by
Wait, not even that
None at me shall ever glance
There will be with words
just no romance
As feelings flow out of my mind,
I don't damn then care
Who thinks what of me?
Or of my poetry.
For I write it as it comes to me
I am no critic worth
The salt in my bones...
When I read you again
It will be ahs! and ayes
That I shall always give
Neither nays nor don'ts
For I am just passing by
Amongst stalwarts
I do hope some day
some one
Also remembers me
Like you...
You’re one of the finest poets
On whom I can
relay my mind
I am just a small
Off the cuff poet
Do pardon me
For words
that I shouldn’t have said
To and or for thee.
The world still has
Kind people like you
Who give off their best?
Their unconditional love
Their very best
Yet expect nothing in return
Not even thanks
As your love is unconditional.
You are like the flowing river
That emanates from paradise
It has no place to hide
Thus upon humanity
It spreads its wings
Nurtures them
As nature does in spring
Ah! You to the poorest of poor
Happiness bring
Like do
The lovely flowers in spring,
The warmth
Of a sunny summer day’s shadow
The snowy winter chills the bone
With abandoned happiness,
Despite the cold and sorrow
Twas all because
Of your good wishes
Morrow after morrow
That we all see
Another tomorrow.
Critiques
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Just wonderful and heartfelt
loved
16 years 4 months ago
grateful
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Lovely Tribute .. really
loved
16 years 4 months ago
GRATEFUL
loved
16 years 4 months ago
THANKS
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Gratitude…opens every
loved
16 years 4 months ago
grateful
loved
16 years 4 months ago
THANKS
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
“ANOTHER OF THE CUFF
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
This is a most beautiful poem
loved
16 years 4 months ago
THE TRIBUTE IS FOR YOU ONLY MA'AM YES TIS FOR U ONLY
loved
16 years 4 months ago
regards
loved
16 years 3 months ago
your personal message
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Just look on your right Istan
loved
16 years 3 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
magics02
16 years ago
Is it
loved
16 years ago
call me
magics02
16 years ago
I understand but I would like to call you Istan
loved
16 years ago
no money
magics02
16 years ago
I thought the song was