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A one time Tribute

A one time tribute

Once you were kind enough

To comment only on my poetry

You gave me the heavenly kick

That anyone could see

Now it’s the first poem of yours

I happen ed to read

What is poetry?

Only you know indeed.

 

I am a simple passer by

Wait, not even that

None at me shall ever glance

There will be with words

just no romance

As  feelings flow out of my mind,

I don't damn then care

Who thinks what of me?

Or  of my poetry.

 

For I write it as it comes to me

I am no critic worth

The salt in my bones...

When I read you again

It will be ahs!  and ayes

That I shall always give

Neither nays nor don'ts

For I am just passing by

Amongst stalwarts

I do hope some day
some one  

Also remembers me

Like you...

You’re one of the finest poets

On whom I can
relay my mind

 

I am just a small

Off the cuff poet

Do pardon me

For words
that I shouldn’t have said

To and or for thee.

 

 

 

 

The world still has

Kind people like you

Who give off their best?

Their unconditional love

Their very best

Yet expect nothing in return

Not even thanks

As your love is unconditional.

 

You are like the flowing river

That emanates from paradise

It has no place to hide

Thus upon humanity

It spreads its wings

Nurtures them

As nature does in spring

Ah! You to the poorest of poor

Happiness bring

Like do

The lovely flowers in spring,

The warmth

Of a sunny summer day’s shadow

The snowy winter chills the bone

With abandoned happiness,

Despite the cold and sorrow

Twas all because

Of your good wishes

Morrow after morrow

That we all see

Another tomorrow.

 

— loved, Feb 07, 2010

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Country/Region: ROU

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M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Just wonderful and heartfelt

I really love this piece or two pieces here. I was wondering if the lovely Norway Poet is our beautiful Anna. I just have to say this read was very, very good loved. Magics02 xoxoxo
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

grateful

we must appreciate those who appreciate us with all my fondest regards and thanks too loved
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Lovely Tribute .. really

Lovely Tribute .. really liked your ending ... I feel as if you have kicked up a gear ... and your writing is showing growth :) kind regards Jayne-Chloe x
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

GRATEFUL

we must appreciate those who appreciate us with all my fondest regards and thanks too loved
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS

THE TRIBUTE POEM IS THE 2269 POEM OF THIS ONE YEAR THANKS FOR UR COMMENT ONE I WROTE JUST NOW IS HERE Love of pets Is a subject of all poets? How I wish me too Had been a dog People would like To take me for a walk So many I’d bark at They all would run As a dog it would be my fun So as I go along For a walk with you See you See you See you Ah! My ma'am Will like to Kiss me Also say I love I love I love
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

grateful

grateful 4 ur lovely comments thanks and rgards hope u will read some more
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS

ANOTHER OF THE CUFF POEM FOR LOVE OF PETS Love of pets Is a subject of all poets? How I wish me too Had been a dog People would like To take me for a walk So many I’d bark at They all would run As a dog it would be my fun So as I go along For a walk with you See you See you See you Ah! My ma'am Will like to Kiss me Also say I love I love I love
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

“ANOTHER OF THE CUFF

"ANOTHER OF THE CUFF POEM"......now you need OFF, funny old language what!!! You call me Ma'am it is only the Queen of England and perhaps a few other dignitaries that have the honour of being called ma'am, for some reason. Madame used to be said in the shops every time we entered in the French manner, but no more, at least as a norm. I don't MIND it though if you wish. I don't think you need to repeat your poems here as we do see them the first time. I would walk with you but not more. Thank you for such fantastic things you have done in my honour, I am pleased and if you just keep on writing but concentrating well on what you say, and throwing away the parts that are not so good, then you could write some very good poetry, as they always said to me at Art College: "Quality, not quantity" but then they were talking to one who is prolific and admittedly not always producing things of quality but it is in the repetition that I found my quality if and when I did. If that's any help! Love to you and have a happy day fro Ann of Norway. (I am British but have lived longer in Norway than in Britain.)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

This is a most beautiful poem

This is a most beautiful poem, so heartfelt and about someone who has touched your heart, it is a tribute of rare quality, a poem well written and I love it. I wonder who it is for, for she/he will be so overwhelmed that she couldn't write any comment on its content, just herself be content through and through that she had brought out such wonderfully loving sentiments in another poet. A poet, I said, as you must not be so over humble about your own qualities of writing, you too will make some beautiful statements in this life, I can tell that from this write so lift up your head and go on with pride. Some of the rhythm is so lovely. My love to Loved from Ann with love. "Who give off their best?".......OF?
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THE TRIBUTE IS FOR YOU ONLY MA'AM YES TIS FOR U ONLY

A POEM I JUST COMPOSED OFF THE CUFF FOE SOME ONES POEM HERE I POST ALSO, FOR U TO READ Love of pets Is a subject of all poets? How I wish me too Had been a dog People would like To take me for a walk So many I’d bark at They all would run As a dog it would be my fun So as I go along For a walk with you See you See you See you Ah! My ma'am Will like to Kiss me Also say I love I love I love
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

regards

In silence I shall tread and hope henceforth to be read regards from Loved [love ed] i shall still call you Ma'am be you Noregian or Brtish for me its no shame hope you will accept my given name REGARDS CONTINUE LOVED
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

your personal message

Ma'am u sent me a wow wow personal msg i quickly read it then got lost how do i access personal msgs unread unreplied pl do guide thanks istan
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Just look on your right Istan

Ann of Norway Just look on your right there is a list of white things and there you will see third from the bottom of the list MESSAGES n'est pas? Prego Ann of Norway.
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

thanks

i found it and reread it shall do the corrections and revert happy valentine to all in NORWAY M\AAM ISTAN
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks to you all who make my day today
M

magics02

16 years ago

Is it

Your name is Istan or Lovely here? Thanks Mona
loved

loved

16 years ago

call me

..what you wish i am one and the same rgds long time no comment from thee thanks for the five stars two /three of my poems made it to EVOLUTION TORMENTED RENOVATED LOVE etc thanks ALL ur good wishes Mona
M

magics02

16 years ago

I understand but I would like to call you Istan

if that is your name indeed. And it is good you made evolution for that is the goal everyone strives for right? I will try to comment more of your work. How is it going on Triond? You making any money there on it? Maybe someday your pic will appear, I am one who likes to see a pic of who I am speaking to, not that it is necessary to comment on though. Mona
loved

loved

16 years ago

no money

..many friends only and perhaps some day u may know me till then let me be let me be let me be loved istan or lovely www.triond.com lovelyhoney
M

magics02

16 years ago

I thought the song was

Let It Be When you find yourself in times of trouble Mother Mary comes to thee Seeking words of wisdom Let it be And in the hours of darkness there is still alight that shines on me There will be an answer LET IT BE<< LET IT BE LET IT BE LET IT BE There will be an answer Let it Be I was singing and typing this to you Istan/Lovely sorry I got carried away I love that song and yes let me be me. I love that in your comment above. That is a good title for your next poem (LET ME BE ME) :) Mona Magics