Kailashana

Feb 07, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

the egg looked lonely this morning

nirvana came suddenly
this morning when my breakfast sizzled
rings of saturn formed
hands and fingers of my potter's wheel,

"clay....it's all about the clay!" you say.

I hold myself up to the light,
find I am broken inside.

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— Kailashana, Feb 07, 2010

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Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Lonely egg

Anna Just had to smile as I too just posted a poem on food too! great minds think alike. Memories stay forever and a day always Electric blue

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Yes!!! There’s only ONE

Yes!!! There's only ONE mind, ONE spirit, in it we are all ONE. Poets know this. ;-) Love. ~A

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Anna

It must be morning there...it's night here. Loved the poem... Yours, Daniel

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

when day and night meet in a

when day and night meet in a poem, heading south... ;-) Love. ~A

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

anna, how are you today :

anna, how are you today : ) lots of love vix xxxx Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Ms Vixy. I feel much

Thanks Ms Vixy. I feel much better now. Had to reconnect, you know what I mean? lol. Love. ~A

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Completely!! glad you feel

Completely!! glad you feel better now xx Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mum

You may have felt like you were disconnected but you were always here ... bloody hell first shells now you ... brilliant poem I've held you to the light and the language of your heart binds me ... (hugz) much love Jayne-Chloe x x x

Stefan

16 years 4 months ago

Hi

We find ourself in all, a reflection, a mirror of our sole. Great poem.

Orphani

16 years 4 months ago

Let my little egg sizzle

Let my little egg sizzle beside yours, and maybe burn, because their are other flavors in the kithen to sample love B

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

The lonely egg, the lonely

The lonely egg, the lonely egg I beg you find another who can be my lover and before you smother me in gunge salt and pepper do dwell on my fine colour... and what a egg-set! As you have done dearest sister Anna Love from Ann P.S. Not seen the http's yet!

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

I had only toast...

this morning...Mouth watering now. I think I'll have sizzling eggs for dinner. mmm! Rosina xena465

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

Had mine curried. Sweated a lot.

Broken inside? Perfectly scrambled? Chilli and curry I fart sulfurously and dance wildly to clear the air Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible