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Transcendental pain

No fruits for you beside the fruits that harrow
and those who seek... despise your hopeless kind,
as if their spirits always will unwind
the deepest cells where thoughts are just too narrow.

Forbidden fruits are endless dreams forbidden!
Forgiven knives shall turn the skin to dust.
You've seen your sparkle hidden back from lust,
like tears hide souls that never have been hidden.


 
— Unlight, Feb 07, 2010

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Country/Region: Romania

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Unlight

My gosh it is good to see you here again I don't know what to say about this poem. It is very deep indeed, your words hide their depth. Good to see you again Chrys
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Ionut,

this one is short but to the point. I enjoyed reading it. Hope to see you here more regularly again this year, my friend. Yours, ~Nina