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Feb 07, 2010
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Transcendental pain
No fruits for you beside the fruits that harrow
and those who seek... despise your hopeless kind,
as if their spirits always will unwind
the deepest cells where thoughts are just too narrow.
Forbidden fruits are endless dreams forbidden!
Forgiven knives shall turn the skin to dust.
You've seen your sparkle hidden back from lust,
like tears hide souls that never have been hidden.
and those who seek... despise your hopeless kind,
as if their spirits always will unwind
the deepest cells where thoughts are just too narrow.
Forbidden fruits are endless dreams forbidden!
Forgiven knives shall turn the skin to dust.
You've seen your sparkle hidden back from lust,
like tears hide souls that never have been hidden.
— Unlight, Feb 07, 2010
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poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
Unlight
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
Ionut,