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Feb 07, 2010
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The drawing
You lost a smile to whims of your own mind
Eyes, not glazed with age, but time and some thing
you remembered just now, still buying peace
from all that remains loud, your hands rest,
forlorn in moment,- one head, a collar
pressed, the sweet calm and polished fingernails
Conduits of sincerity and absence
— doorman, Feb 07, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Yes!~A
doorman
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for reading,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Espen
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
A moment there then gone into timelessness.
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Amazing
doorman
16 years 3 months ago
magic02