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One last memory

If only they had seen

sunset drooling on a counterpane,

or felt the salivating nerve

draw taut a twisted smile,

they might, at an untidy pause,

have snared the taunted beast

with scorn or sympathetic barb.

But nothing spoke; nothing moved,

or saw the ugly tear, brim, swell,

slip, slide and fall on faded patches

smothered in the half-light.

 

Neutered with imaginings,

lust in crimson eddies quivers;

hovering on moistened jowls,

swimming with deceptive creases,

passion heaves its weary prelude.

Tearing claws dissect and ribbon,

letters cursed, but then forgiven.

 

The face alone remains,

posing taut frivolity

with predatory guile;

Baring false perfection…

in a curve,

and small attempt at promise…

in a look.

A hint of female nightmare…

crows the eyes;

A modest, unobtrusive nose.

Hair startled by a sunburst,

but knowing not to hide her face.

 

Abandon gleams through parted lips

and would have spoken of a smile,

had not the shutter fallen;

thin bright angled fragments

latticing her startled face,

lengthening the jagged shadows,

closing in the sagging head,

growling one last memory.

 

— professor, Feb 05, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear BB

Smile ... memories ahhhh how they haunt ... wonderfully written .. latticing her startled face, lengthening the jagged shadows, closing in the sagging head, growling one last memory. Brother these last lines .... they made the poem for me the rest is brilliant as usual but there is something about those lines ... they speak to me love and hugs lil Sis x x x
professor

professor

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Lil Sis

Not the kind of subject you would expect me to post a poem on right now and it obviously has no bearing whatsoever on my present life lol. So glad you liked it though and I have to agree with you that the finish is everything I wanted it to be. Love and hugs BB
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Kal

So glad you found my words so edible. It might indeed draw a few listeners from a box in Cambridge although it would need to be the Market square in Cambridge lol. With my best wishes Keith
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RobertKnott

16 years 3 months ago

This is very good!

Thank you for sharing... I'll re-read and let it simmer. Something in the style reminds me of.... DeMaupassant? Hmmmmm.... Adieu!
professor

professor

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Robert

Hope you also enjoy it on re-reading. I never did get around to reading DeMaupassant so I will have to take your word for it. With my best wishes. Keith
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

HAHAHAHAHA BB … yeah the

HAHAHAHAHA BB ... yeah the title was bothering ... and its much much better now ... seeee LOL god I love being right ... doesnt happen often LOL so when it does I gotta crow a little ;) peter pan style lol love you Lil Sis