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One last memory
If only they had seen
sunset drooling on a counterpane,
or felt the salivating nerve
draw taut a twisted smile,
they might, at an untidy pause,
have snared the taunted beast
with scorn or sympathetic barb.
But nothing spoke; nothing moved,
or saw the ugly tear, brim, swell,
slip, slide and fall on faded patches
smothered in the half-light.
Neutered with imaginings,
lust in crimson eddies quivers;
hovering on moistened jowls,
swimming with deceptive creases,
passion heaves its weary prelude.
Tearing claws dissect and ribbon,
letters cursed, but then forgiven.
The face alone remains,
posing taut frivolity
with predatory guile;
Baring false perfection…
in a curve,
and small attempt at promise…
in a look.
A hint of female nightmare…
crows the eyes;
A modest, unobtrusive nose.
Hair startled by a sunburst,
but knowing not to hide her face.
Abandon gleams through parted lips
and would have spoken of a smile,
had not the shutter fallen;
thin bright angled fragments
latticing her startled face,
lengthening the jagged shadows,
closing in the sagging head,
growling one last memory.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear BB
professor
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks Lil Sis
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Kal
RobertKnott
16 years 3 months ago
This is very good!
professor
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Robert
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Like the new title much
professor
16 years 3 months ago
As you said Lady Lil Sis
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
HAHAHAHAHA BB … yeah the