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Making Babies

In midst of Winter
a heartbeat promise begins
Creation of Spring
— faerybeki, Feb 05, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Beki

This is exquisite my dear friend I ahve missed reading you glad I popped in tonight have been having a well earned rest ;) love and big hugs Jayne x x x btw I was going to pose the same ? as Anna but will just wait and see what your answer is ... (huggles) I hope you and Omi are still dancing dervishes
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jayne, hope the rest

Thanks Jayne, hope the rest is paying off hon ;) and you're feeling well :) Please see reply to Anna lol should say creation of Summer really heehee :) love ya xxx
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

Hey Beki...

Makin babies is fun too... lol, good to see ya, liked your haiku for new spring heartbeats. Richard
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 3 months ago

Hey beautiful moonman, glad

Hey beautiful moonman, glad you liked my little haiku :) haven't had a lot of time for writing recently, what with all the baby making lol but always time for an ickle haiku ;) hugs xxx