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sunscreen
sunscreen
Feb 04, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

suspension

The flash of my fist
The crash of your jaw
blood dripping for your flaw

Attempting to hurt me
Collision course of me and you
Standing in my victors corner

Today I have won
Tomorrow I lose
Continuing in downward spiral

In the end you have what I do not.
— sunscreen, Feb 04, 2010

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 4 months ago

Boy!

That seems so graphic - I can hear the bones break and see the blood gushing out! Then to honestly bare all and go from the outer victory of "winning the battle" to admit to "losing the war"... brave sentiments from a young man! Good cathartic write - hope it helped you! Boni ps. Spell check on Suspension ok!
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 4 months ago

Lol....

I was kinda still rattled from it when I wrote it so I didn't spell that right lol I was like I know how to spell that....mistakes lol
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Hello one

Yes and you must of been rattled right out of your cage. LOL Haven't spoken to you in a while and liked it but now wonder what was going on here. Are you going to add on here? Will visit you again and hope all is well. Continue the writing through the anger the feeling and mostly through those shades of your's. Love Mona xoxox
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 4 months ago

Well.........

I don't think I could addition to it, I think it says all that it needs to.
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Great

A job you consider done is a job considered won. Mona:)
whitetea

whitetea

16 years 3 months ago

Yep

I hail from the dark corners of Layton. lol