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Teen Queen

"Oh my God, his ass is hot!"
says the little blond robot
as she swings and flaunts her own
like some bitchy Beyonce clone

Giggling, she makes the bus,
stubs her toe, creates a fuss,
blows her current love a kiss
while tossing hair with teenage bliss

During class she gives a smile
to every boy she thinks worthwhile
texts her girlfriends, files her nails,
takes a pop quizz, which she fails

Back at home she hits her room,
lighting candles in the gloom
brings Neo up on her PC
and posts her mindless poetry

In the Chat Room she is queen
a veritable chat machine
grinning to herself in glee
while blogging incoherently

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, Feb 04, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

hmm I likes lol

Just a bit of tweaking for rhythm is all this needs lol btw the author and title literally yanked me in here ! nice nice, Mark "some things change, some things do not"
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

oops

Mark "some things change, some things do not"
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

nice nice

There seems to be a valued opininon up there :) Mark "some things change, some things do not"
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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Lon

As I am privy to your poems before they are posted, it is hard for me to critique here as I do that pre post. However this reminds me so much of many of the young ones I had to train when I was shift leader at ( I will leave it unamed here) a fast food resurant. It would be more amusing if I did not have to witness what you speak of first hand lol MeChrys
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

LOL

her mindless poetry... in droves! Always, Cat