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the man who writes at night
i can see him
in the window
the man who writes at
night
relentless his
stabbing and
slashing, paper
bleeds
i feel sorry for it
and pull a swig from
my sorrows
the man keeps
writing on
in wretched jerks
and fibulations
relentless his
knife, his
heart, paper
bleeds
i rub my
vicarious wounds
for it
the man who writes at
night
finds blood
at the end
of his business
flushing it
writes about---
relentless his
fever and bottle
tearing, paper
bleeds
tides fall
and i sleep
for it
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
I get that you want a continuous flow here.
the_fool
16 years 4 months ago
ty very much
themoonman
16 years 4 months ago
Welcome...
the_fool
16 years 4 months ago
sweet
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear ... Fool ...
the_fool
16 years 4 months ago
howard the duck! lol
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
I gather you know who Howard