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That Smile Above Your Chin
We've walked a path not so bright
into the darkness of the night
We share the light that once was torn
for the time has come to be reborn
The road to happiness is not too far
capture those lights, grab those stars
Release your anguish, blow away the pain
Let go the scars and all the blame
Don't hold back not a minute more
the world awaits you behind that door
Get it out for all it's worth
release the chain, unleash the hurts
Do not suffer in silence no more
a once stilled voice, just open the door
Make that move when the time is right
it is your choice, let in the light
Open your heart and open your soul
For it's your story for once to be told
No more pain and no more fears
No more endless silent tears
Only you can heal your heart
Rid the pain of hurts so dark.
I pray for you in every way
I send you sunshine every day.
Remember this, we all survive
We learn to live, we learn to strive
Open that door, let the sunshine in
And wear that smile above your chin..
Critiques
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
A smile on your chin
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you
ifoundaplace
16 years 4 months ago
Wow.
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you friend
BrightEyed
16 years 4 months ago
brilliant
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
WONDERFUL POSSIBLITY good poem Mona.
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you Anna for your feedback
ifoundaplace
16 years 4 months ago
Mona
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
You're welcome Hunter and Anna corrections made
ifoundaplace
16 years 4 months ago
Mona
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
I think you have created a