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mdehe
Feb 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

R e s p e c T

Respect my propblems
or ill push eject on your spinal colums
and your body will reject your your thoughts to be walkin
and i find its a bit suspect to be talkin
all this shit bout peck when when hes not your problem
its you yourself who needs a check
youre at the bottom
but myself,
i prospect when i solve em
cause on top of my neck is like stalin
and all of you are specs
scared of the goblen
not even hitlers wreck could stop em
so who wants to bet cause i be coppin em
— mdehe, Feb 02, 2010

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mdehe

16 years 3 months ago

hahaha

sorry you didnt like...
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mdehe

16 years 3 months ago

and

by the way really i dont see how you can say self obsessed rap considering i doubt you even haveany clue what its about, considering its only a excerpt from a much longer poem i have written. i just liked the sound/flow of this part so i threw it up. especially cause many on here wont read a poem if its more then 10 lines.
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mdehe

16 years 3 months ago

a lot

of poetry to me is about the language and the flow and how you can use metaphoers, similaies, personification, ect to get across a messag thatcan be intrepreted differently by alsmot anyone who reads it but has a similar tone and feel for everyone. i know there are many types of poetry out there but this is what i like and what i try to write, if you do not like that i do not see the need to critisize especially when its no constructive what-so-ever, but i agree i would use spell check but that takes too long ahaha