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Feb 02, 2010
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Sorcerer
Cloaked in ragged robes of dark vermillion
a twisted, corpse-like being starts to sing
chanting words no throat was meant to utter
and snickering at thoughts of what they'll bring
His rotting, bony fingers gesture wildly
sparks of green Hell-fire kiss the air
filling every mortal soul with madness
and nightmare dreams of torture and despair
Bubbling corruption flows in rivers
inundating everything in sight
as ancient, flying Demons ride the darkness
bringing forth their own eternal night
A mindless evil swirls into existence
a crawling chaos covering the Earth
causing every living, breathing creature
to curse the very God who gave them birth
and as his final howls dissolve in silence
he kneels before a thing no eye should see
and it, in turn, proceeds to nibble slowly
this self-same fool who dared to set it free
C. Lon R. Bruso
a twisted, corpse-like being starts to sing
chanting words no throat was meant to utter
and snickering at thoughts of what they'll bring
His rotting, bony fingers gesture wildly
sparks of green Hell-fire kiss the air
filling every mortal soul with madness
and nightmare dreams of torture and despair
Bubbling corruption flows in rivers
inundating everything in sight
as ancient, flying Demons ride the darkness
bringing forth their own eternal night
A mindless evil swirls into existence
a crawling chaos covering the Earth
causing every living, breathing creature
to curse the very God who gave them birth
and as his final howls dissolve in silence
he kneels before a thing no eye should see
and it, in turn, proceeds to nibble slowly
this self-same fool who dared to set it free
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Feb 02, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
It scares me to know how
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks, Anna!
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
ohh God
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks, mark!
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Lonnie,
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Victor!
poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you, M'Dear!
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Jayne!
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Lon
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
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