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Feb 02, 2010
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life is it a ?
was it the coffee pot
i forgot?
dangling little verbs
of espresso
reading little things about me
glorious explosions flying around the sun
and my kitchen
those neatly folding napkins
of death and forgetfulness
and oh my there's a piece
of wallpaper out of place
in the mending wall i do
before the world gets off
because i reached Jupiter
and said good-by
i forgot?
dangling little verbs
of espresso
reading little things about me
glorious explosions flying around the sun
and my kitchen
those neatly folding napkins
of death and forgetfulness
and oh my there's a piece
of wallpaper out of place
in the mending wall i do
before the world gets off
because i reached Jupiter
and said good-by
— Orphani, Feb 02, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Drops of
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
A melding of Julia Child and Rocket Man!
Nordic cloud
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Molto espressivo Barry
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
Hmmmm....
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Life