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Feb 01, 2010
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Doggone blue
I’m so lonesome, ever since, you went away
Every morning, I look out, the skies are grey
There’s no sunshine, here to warm me, and
I’m chilled right to the bone
I don’t know if, I can stay here on my own
This old house is, just one big, empty space
I’m so restless, and I feel, so out of place
There’s no loving, when I wake up, from
A long and sleepless night
It’s so peaceful, and lord that just aint right
Think I’ll go out, and find me, a new best friend
Maybe this one, will stay, to the very end
We’ll go walking , every morning, and
At night we’ll cuddle up
So tomorrow, gonna buy me a pup
— shazbat, Feb 01, 2010
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Mark
16 years 4 months ago
feeling the determination in doggon blue
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
feeling the determination in doggone blue
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
I saw it you know :(
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
Mark “some things change,