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magics02
Feb 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Poetic Minds Never Run Out Of Time

 

 
A feeling of poem,
the feeling of home.
A crack, a slit,
together we sit.

Amending two endings,
begins a new inning.
A chapter, a book,
we all share that look.

Poetic minds,
never run out of time.
A circle, a poem,
a feeling of home.

Drawn to a sight,
may cut like a knife
Friends unknown,
we are not alone.

Unraveling the theme,
of a beautiful scene.
An egg, its shell
to poetically tell


Cracked and pierced
a young yolk's fierce
Poetic minds,
never run out of time.

We hear, we look,
we share this book.
Poetic minds let's join together,
the words of now last  forever.

A feeling of poem
the feeling of home.

a crack, a slit,
Together we sit.


 

— magics02, Feb 01, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

A young yolks fierce is like

A young yolks fierce is like their words or thought. And also not intended for youth only here. A yolk of an egg the consistency can be mighty or slimmy something of that nature. As an egg is a sign of life, the baby chick, the young embryo, the sunny side ups, you know what I mean. I may have to revisit the egg thing. This poem is kind of like how we as poetic people sit together with our verses and our words, like an ending or a beginning of a song. Poetic minds never run out of time since time is all we have. Drawn to a site probably would be better to put (drawn to a sight) as poetic minds have many sights they write of and words may cut as sharp as the knife, meaning hit to the core so to say. Kind of like where my mind is now but piecing it into a thought. Ms Mona xoxox
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Poetic Minds

Mona Poetic minds never run out of time Unravelling a theme of a beautiful scene awesome I feel this in all i write Electric Blue
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 4 months ago

Just read

Just read your explanations, and i love where your mind goes. Please don't change that beautiful way of thinking. Love Roscoe, P.S, Loved the poem to, nearly forgot got wrapped up in your explanations.Love again Roscoe....
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you all

For your insight of this poem. It is true as we write we feel as we feel we write, no other way to be. The soul of the mind and the mind of the soul joined together with love. I thank you for all the feedback so generously given here. Peace to all who enter my home Love Mona
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona, we crack the

Dear Mona, we crack the outside, and we're all the same inside. Exactly. We pretend otherwise. Thank you for your poem. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Your welcome

So true, so true and I have learned alot here so far and will continue the journey that is set before me. Thank you for stopping over. Mona