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FOOD

Things with wings of lace and dream
hover 'round my head
bringing visions that would seem
to fill my soul with dread

I walk a shadowed, twisted street
and vaguely wonder why
as sunlight wanes and eerie darkness
swallows up the sky

Clutching tightly to my hand
a small, misshapen child
croaks words I cannot understand
in a voice both soft and wild

her words become an urgent cry
for somehing I must give
somethng that will bleed and die
so she may eat and live

My eyes grow wide with mortal fear
as they begin to see
more shapes like her that gather here
in close proximity

They grasp and claw and tear and bite
and now I understand
I am the food they seek this night
these children of the Damned

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, Feb 01, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Lon

Let me be the first to say that my reaction after reading this was that of watching a movie with a twist at the end. I really do not have any suggestions or corrections for this work. Eerie darkness swallows up the sky what an image producing line among many others sounds like some ones nightmare Chrys
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

My thanks, M'Dear!

It's always a pleasure and an honor to get your opinion on one of my poems! Glad you were pleased with this one!
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Pixee!

I appreciate your reading of my poem and the nice comment! I will be looking forward to seeing some of your work, soon I hope!
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Indi

One does have to allow one's darker nature to have free reign every now and again!
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Indi's comment is insightful,

timing is everything for a piece like this. Sorry, I can offer no useful crit, a gem of scariness, raised the hackles, truly ruly scary. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks, Jess!

I always am grateful for comments from you for I know they will be honest and helpful in many ways! Glad you got some shivers from this one!
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Lonnie

I popped in to read a few poems while I had a break ... and this ones title made me think 'Food' ... and then I read this gem ... brilliantly scary write dear man ... trickster made me think it was food ...well a kind of food lol but not the type I was thinking send my regards to chrys love and hugs to you both Jayne-Chloe
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

My thanks, Jayne!

Well, in the end we're all 'food' for the worms, eh? Thanks for stopping by to read and I'm glad I fooled ya!
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Anna!

No, it isn't by any means! Road-kill stew perhaps, but never Chicken Soup!
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Food

Wow! Intriguing read with a great shake-up ending! Always, Cat
mand

mand

16 years 3 months ago

flawless timing, it takes

flawless timing, it takes work and imagination to create a poem of this caliber, I love suprises and this one did the job. Great write. Well done. Love Mand