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Jan 31, 2010
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Why the Empty Road
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it's incredible how the columns
that border life begin to fall
and the rules that govern
begin to fade and dissappear;
Leaving what one finally believes in
to gather dust and crumble.
Death, the final frontier
answers the questions concerning Time's tenacity
yet leaves one's life in a veritable void;
Breaking the brackets that contain
all of the countless doubts
that dawns for all of the days
that one can remember.
But, longing
merely ascerbates the cause and catalyst
birthing confusion to an eye
that understands, not
the reasons Life orchestrates, in such a way
and ends up splitting hairs of midirection
into memory fragments of the road, ignored.
it's incredible how the columns
that border life begin to fall
and the rules that govern
begin to fade and dissappear;
Leaving what one finally believes in
to gather dust and crumble.
Death, the final frontier
answers the questions concerning Time's tenacity
yet leaves one's life in a veritable void;
Breaking the brackets that contain
all of the countless doubts
that dawns for all of the days
that one can remember.
But, longing
merely ascerbates the cause and catalyst
birthing confusion to an eye
that understands, not
the reasons Life orchestrates, in such a way
and ends up splitting hairs of midirection
into memory fragments of the road, ignored.
— docmaverick, Jan 31, 2010
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Critiques
raskin
16 years 4 months ago
The road ignored, I like
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
Things combined....
zarul
16 years 4 months ago
i like this poem
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
Consider thyself....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 4 months ago
I agree....with the previous comment....
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
Thanx, Antoinette....