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Why the Empty Road

At full count
it's incredible how the columns
that border life begin to fall

and the rules that govern
begin to fade and dissappear;

Leaving what one finally believes in
to gather dust and crumble.

Death, the final frontier
answers the questions concerning Time's tenacity
yet leaves one's life in a veritable void;

Breaking the brackets that contain
all of the countless doubts

that dawns for all of the days
that one can remember.

But, longing
merely ascerbates the cause and catalyst
birthing confusion to an eye

that understands, not
the reasons Life orchestrates, in such a way

and ends up splitting hairs of midirection
into memory fragments of the road, ignored.
— docmaverick, Jan 31, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raskin

16 years 4 months ago

The road ignored, I like

The road ignored, I like that. Aging with the pillars, brackets of doubt falling down. Idealism of the young, brash, bright, with age are altered or changed. I like your ideas here. How we age is how I took this. raskin
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Things combined....

...certainly DO shape how we age. Yes, 'twas a poem of reflection...I would say. Thanx, for the encouragement, raskin. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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zarul

16 years 4 months ago

i like this poem

'' Death, the final frontier answers the questions concerning Time’s tenacity yet leaves one’s life in a veritable void; '' This stanza has such a commanding existence. '' Life orchestrates '' and this statement captures my attention in an indescribable manner. I love how it sounds. Allow me to use it for my future work. Good work
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Consider thyself....

...sufficionately allowed. Thanx for commenting, I appreciate the feedback. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 4 months ago

I agree....with the previous comment....

This IS such a commanding existance...you touched me with this one...actually zoomed in on me you might say...really loved the way you describe one of life's evemtual end..Antoinette Mari
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thanx, Antoinette....

...for the feedback ! I've got to realize the "formula" for zooming in on folks, nes'pa? For now, I'm happy that I zoomed in on you. Thanx again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.