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CONVOY

A sea-stained notebook in Gaelic was found on an empty liferaft floating in the North Sea in the wild winter weather of January 1943. The translation follows………………

CONVOY

Many years have now passed since the time

When my brothers and I used to climb

Over sun-splashed rock shores

Washed clean by the waves’ force,

Life was sweet, then, the world was all mine.
 

But I grew up and left my birthplace

Where the sun seemed to kiss each small face

Joined the Merchant Marine,

So the world I have seen,

But saw nowhere my home to replace
 

Then the war came and I sailed away

Out of Methil, on board “Mandalay”.

Heading North to Murmansk,

Cargo ; much-needed tanks .

Nazi bombers attacked from Norway.
 

I’ve been on this liferaft for three days,

For those bombers left my ship ablaze.

The cold bites to my bones;

I’m the last, all alone,

In this vast, empty sea :walls of grey.
 

As I write these last words I can see

That this world is no longer for me.

As my eyes close once more,

I’ve reached that cottage door

Where my spirit has flown - I am FREE.

— Tam the Chanter, Jan 31, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Ian...

This is so very beautiful... Bitter-sweet and sublime... A whisper from the heart. Love, Raven
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 4 months ago

memories

Thanks for the kindness, Raven. The convoys suffered terribly on the trips to Russia, Methil is my home town and it was there that the convoys assembled. I'm so pleased that I can still tug at your heart-strings. Love Ian xx
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Arrow

16 years 4 months ago

Moving

Stanza 3 doesn't work for me as well as the rest but that's all. I'm not quite sure why (maybe the tense of need, maybe the stress on the first syllable of Norway). This reminds me of Irish music my father used to listen to while I was growing up, esp. Four Green Fields - unpretentious, emotive. A different conflict, certainly, but it strikes a similar chord in me.
A

Arrow

16 years 4 months ago

Yes,

it reads better.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 4 months ago

wonderful

Ian, This was beautiful and haunting. Your words are like magic and I always look foward to reading them. Elizabeth