magics02

Jan 31, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

REACH OUT TO THEM

REACH OUT TO THEM

The pain which one bears
when no one seems to care
Reach out to them
Become their friend

A friend so true
is not colored in blue
Share a smile, share a laugh
Friendship flower, forever last

The pain which one bears
when no one seems to care
Remember, we all were young
A new day for them has just begun

Reach out to them
and be a friend
Our words to shower care
To a friend we may share

No words can express how they feel
for their words cry out far too real
Open the door and let them in
Give them light to breath again

The pain which one bears
when no one seems to care
Reach out to them
Become their friend.

This inspirational piece is what I awoke to this morning and is for all the women and men, young and old, that suffer silently in pain with whatever they are going through in life or have gone through already. Know that upon reaching out to others and others reaching out to you it can make difference, YOU can make a difference and share your care with them. Do think on it for whenever you take ones hand and join it with yours then it becomes "THE FRIEND"

— magics02, Jan 31, 2010

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Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Compassionate one Mona

The sweet Mona with her warm heart tells us how to become a friend of those in need, she is right we should help our fellow beings those we meet, it is hard to help all even though one might like to act God and do so, it is not always possible either as the 'friend' might not wish to be a friend, there can be difficulties, but the sentiment is real and beautiful Mona. I must have time to study this as you have some bits that don't have the right rhythm and, if I may say so, repetition a little too much of the same ideas, I shall peruse it at leisure and see if I can help you out my friend. Love to you Mona with the big heart. From Anskie bird.

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Grazzi

Hello Anna and thank you for the feedback here. I wrote this for one on here who I came to meet recently who is a gentle young woman. And you know no one ight like to act God but it is in him that we are able to serve and be served. Just my little thought of my OWN. It is just nicer when people can have peace in their hearts and if a friend does not wish to be a friend then that is okay too. I have been the type to always reach out to many and have much compassion to my fellow men. Yes I do not break bread with everyone but I will offer them coffee when ever they want it. I hope all is well with you and how is the painting coming along by the way? Been busy lately with Dad being very ill at the moment. I am most concerned about him right now. Talk to you soon Love and Hugs from Florida Mona xoxoxo

ifoundaplace

16 years 4 months ago

=D Dani.

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

thank you lovely

please see message in pm now if you have time. You always rise to the occasion and I like your reasoning also on here. Love You, Mona xoxoxo

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Reach Out

Mona Sorry a bit choked up - this really hit home as i am going through a lot of stuff right now. Electric Blue

BrightEyed

16 years 4 months ago

beautiful

you are such a caring person. ur work inspires me. i love every piece you do :) ur friend, bright eyed

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thanking you again

Eyes I write for myself as I also write for others. Thank you for the comment so sweet. Talk to you soon Love Mona xoxoxoxox

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 4 months ago

a timely needed astounding

a timely needed astounding poem

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you

for stopping by and hope your having a great day so far. I thank you for your comments and your bright stars. magics02

the_fool

16 years 3 months ago

small tweak the pain you

small tweak the pain you have to bear when noone seems to care' or .the pain everyone bears when nobody cares'