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the snake
the snake
barking dogs and children,
lamplights in a fog,
come each day at sundown,
the glass is filled with grog.
put the children in their beds,
sit by the lantern light,
talk of life and all its pain
deep into the night.
you think of things you’ve never done,
you think of that that’s passed,
you think of how it might have been,
until there is the last,
last is always never first,
last is clever and cold,
last pours forth the scent of light
from unforgotten mold,
mold of life, indeed, itself,
mold that will never break,
mold the alchemists sought for
is hidden with the snake,
snake is laughing silently,
snake will never tell,
all it knows and ever was,
like the ringing of a bell
bell the angels rang at first,
bell that shall not break,
bell that mother earth does hold
inside her with the snake.
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Wow Victor only one gripe
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
The snake, immortal shall
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Jayne,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Victor I bow to your vision
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Jayne-Chloe,
poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
Victor
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Chrys,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Our wisdom lies not in what
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,