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Rainbows are Befalling the best of His Time




He’s watching you from the series of clouds
Time of Him guiding those hearts of doubts
To all grudges and dolls you felt He sends enlightening signs
Touches you to have peace for hatred vying your eyes

Gaze at the clouds and you will be free of veins
That keep haunting and killing you with cruel pains
May not be freezed with the heavy sin
No closed doors to know where it had been

Cry out weights before ‘tis time to rain
So when drops fell your faith gets never drained
Feel His bless and feel blessed for the Time
And realize you’re free of anything unkind

When the rain falls as a raging storm
Sorrow might be waiting outside your door
Let it not be something to hinder you to explore
The irony of this world and the reasons the Time was for

Wonders of wonders, I wonder how much will it cost?
To capture the never-ending Time to foresee my final cross?
To see the plagues of my mistakes and the bleed of my faith
When al the world go turning very fast and late

Or the Time was of puzzles and ‘tis me the missing piece
That could finally solve the problem to a perfect bliss?
And it may be somehow the timely still of strength
A dream at stake with the Timely help

Moonlights pour but rainbows can still be seen
By anyone who in their hearts let the Kingdom in
Flames on waters the Time will be
As the rainbow are befalling it for the wonder Glee..
— whitescatter, Jan 31, 2010

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Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

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Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

Trubble

Welcome to NeoPoet Jas ! Of the get go here I had a problem seeing this. It is not friendly to my eyes (the caps explaining it before I even started to read it and lack of stanza breakdown) There is also a dialect there I picked up on which can be most difficult to overcome. I take it English is your second language? Hopfully helpful, maybe not, Mark "some things change, some things do not"
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

A good go at it Jasfer..

what this place is for :) Mark You are the leaf, I am the tree. Cling onto me, I'll grow into you. http://www.neopoet.com/node/36042
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Like Jess Suggested …

Like Jess Suggested ... remove the introduction, I know its a solid poem,it just needs to be read naked without the frivolity ,.. and thats how I saw it I will watch the edits on this one welcome to neopoet kind regards Jayne-Chloe