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Jan 31, 2010
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Rainbows are Befalling the best of His Time
He’s watching you from the series of clouds
Time of Him guiding those hearts of doubts
To all grudges and dolls you felt He sends enlightening signs
Touches you to have peace for hatred vying your eyes
Gaze at the clouds and you will be free of veins
That keep haunting and killing you with cruel pains
May not be freezed with the heavy sin
No closed doors to know where it had been
Cry out weights before ‘tis time to rain
So when drops fell your faith gets never drained
Feel His bless and feel blessed for the Time
And realize you’re free of anything unkind
When the rain falls as a raging storm
Sorrow might be waiting outside your door
Let it not be something to hinder you to explore
The irony of this world and the reasons the Time was for
Wonders of wonders, I wonder how much will it cost?
To capture the never-ending Time to foresee my final cross?
To see the plagues of my mistakes and the bleed of my faith
When al the world go turning very fast and late
Or the Time was of puzzles and ‘tis me the missing piece
That could finally solve the problem to a perfect bliss?
And it may be somehow the timely still of strength
A dream at stake with the Timely help
Moonlights pour but rainbows can still be seen
By anyone who in their hearts let the Kingdom in
Flames on waters the Time will be
As the rainbow are befalling it for the wonder Glee..
— whitescatter, Jan 31, 2010
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
This is a pretty good poem but that introduction
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
look up "hubris" in the dictionary
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
I do believe I understand that
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
Trubble
whitescatter
16 years 4 months ago
helpful is it thanksJasfer
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
A good go at it Jasfer..
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Like Jess Suggested …