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Good Day
Killer looked around, all wide eyed and staring
There were lots of families here, he saw people sharing
He was so amused, seeing youngsters chase each other
Heard them shouting, laughing... smiling father, doting mother
He was on vacation... for too short a moment
The scene here was pleasant, not his usual torment
The rides here such great fun, they really made him dizzy
He thought that maybe now, he'd had too much that's fizzy
The music here was awful fun
He did things he wouldn't have done
If he had, stayed at home
And didn't have the urge to roam
Something nagging peace of mind
A nasty thought of some kind
That man with the little child... that one over there
He stood right behind her, kept stroking her blonde hair
Why should it bother him, what had set him to thinking?
He knew that it was wrong, his heart was slowly sinking
He watched them both for some time, they didn't seem to match
Then the picture he had seen... The girl who had been snatched!
He saw it all so clearly now, it was an Amber Alert
He had to stop, this bad man... before the girl got hurt
The fun had drained from him now
But he would fix, this thing somehow
He followed them from ride to ride
Watched the man look side to side
Guiding her to back of scenes
Killer knew what that would mean
As the man made up his mind
Killer came from behind
He yelled to her, she should run
As he prepared, for some fun
Peverted smile changed to hate
As the guy lost her fate
Killer said; 'Go find a cop'
As he made this man... a mop
Fear ran through this asshole's eyes
He knew he'd lost, his 'dad' disguise
Pants open, and his belt undone
He'd been stopped before his fun
Killer grabbed the offending tool
The monster then began to mewl
Ripped from the roots, the blood did spurt
Killer said; I hope this hurts
Stuffed in his oral cavity
A sign of his depravity
They found him giving... himself head
A last peversion... face bloody red
Now Killer could enjoy the day
The troubled thoughts all gone away
Pleased that things worked out so well
Another pervert has gone to hell
Critiques
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Gee
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
Rooting for Killer...
hardcorechick28
16 years 4 months ago
THAT WAS AMAZING
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
I don't know...
hardcorechick28
16 years 4 months ago
thanks
DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
Amazing Gee, now Killer is
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
I appreciate...