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73rd Street
73rd street
rasping cough explodes
from cold, $2.00 room.
Leon peers through
filth-clouded glass, across
snow winter-scape at sparkling,
snow covered everything--
fretful city sleeps.
his keen sight flicks from one scene to
next--
from anonymous hookers opposite corner
to sleepless steeples of death churches
marching city skyline,
out of sight until his gaze is caught
by darkness of city’s edge where night bandits
lurk, planning early morning breakings--
droogs each one, snarling eyes, blank, with
avaricious, sneak-thief sight.
city’s heart incandescent glowing,
sounds seize his sight to witness
three bums, alley entrance quarrel over last drops
from bottomed out bottle of thunderbird swill--
his sight quickens,
red lights, blue lights--
fire erupts from four story tenement cross
his own street.
“poor bastards,” his thin-edged mind, smirks.
woman jumps from 2nd floor window,
lands in white snow, freezes deadly.
broken arms, breathes last breath, face of an
angel, seventeen-years-old, body bag bound;
its zipper is heard in seven kingdoms.
from his eyes tears fall for her freedom.
dragging soiled kerchief, wipes them away,
stares at heaven’s light; twinkling holes enclosed
in perfect blackness.
window sill where he leans,
freezing cockroach walks slowly past, mind alert
for food.
Leon watches, benevolently strokes red-brown
back once, and spits on the sill.
cockroach slurps sustenance joyfully.
warm again,
accelerates its pace.
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Ahh. Yes. Where pride and
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I almost forgot to mention:
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
Plus, it reads....
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Doc
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
As Doc has said … this is
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Jayne-Chloe