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73rd Street

73rd street

 

rasping cough explodes

from cold, $2.00 room.

 

Leon peers through

filth-clouded glass, across

snow winter-scape at sparkling,

snow covered everything--

fretful city sleeps.

 

his keen sight flicks from one scene to

next--

from anonymous hookers opposite corner

to sleepless steeples of death churches

marching city skyline,

out of sight until his gaze is caught

by darkness of city’s edge where night bandits

lurk, planning early morning breakings--

droogs each one, snarling eyes, blank, with

avaricious, sneak-thief sight.

 

city’s heart incandescent glowing,

sounds seize his sight to witness

three bums, alley entrance quarrel over last drops

from bottomed out bottle of thunderbird swill--

 

his sight quickens,

red lights, blue lights--

fire erupts from four story tenement cross

his own street.

“poor bastards,” his thin-edged mind, smirks.

woman jumps from 2nd floor window,

lands in white snow, freezes deadly.

broken arms, breathes last breath, face of an

angel, seventeen-years-old, body bag bound;

its zipper is heard in seven kingdoms.

 

from his eyes tears fall for her freedom.

dragging soiled kerchief, wipes them away,

stares at heaven’s light; twinkling holes enclosed

in perfect blackness.

 

window sill where he leans,

freezing cockroach walks slowly past, mind alert

for food.

 

Leon watches, benevolently strokes red-brown

back once, and spits on the sill.

cockroach slurps sustenance joyfully.

warm again,

accelerates its pace.

 

vcp

— Victorclaude, Jan 30, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens, D. H. Lawrence, Charles Bukowski, Bob Dylan, Leonard Cohen, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Percy Bysshe Shelley, T. S. Eliot, E. E. Cummings, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, Pablo Neruda, Joni Mitchell, William Shakespeare, Basho, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Kelly Marie Hayner, Susan Wydville. D. Phillip Caron, Elizabeth Bishop.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Ahh. Yes. Where pride and

Ahh. Yes. Where pride and prejudice, vanity and arrogance meet for a brief inkling in an eye-I. Love this kaleidoscope of imagery, this plethora of emotion and this piñata of punctuation that is your body of poetry. The elephant is recognized. Thank you. Enjoying your presence. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Anna,

Thank you for the read and kind comments. There is a lightness in this forum that I have yet to fully fathom. It is a pleasure to be here. Victor Claude
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

I almost forgot to mention:

I almost forgot to mention: "the zipper is heard in seven kingdoms" will haunt me because I have heard it. Astounding! Bow. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Anna,

I have heard the zipper too many times, myself. Three years in the Nam rings in my ears -- the zipper sound. Thanks again, Victor
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Plus, it reads....

...as it was written. There is, "Woah"!...and then there is, "way waoah"! This is an example of the latter. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Doc

I am pleased that you liked this little ditty. Thank you very much for your accolade. Victor Claude
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

As Doc has said … this is

As Doc has said ... this is wayyyyyy woahhhh ... I loved it Victor, and I cannot find fault ... well writen and I too will not forgot quickly, the zipper heard in seven kingdoms ... love Jayne-Chloe
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Jayne-Chloe

The first writing of this piece took about five minutes, and the editing over a year. I kept going back to it, changing it here and there until it is offered as it now stands. I think it is finished. Thank you for your kind remarks. Victor Claude