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Jan 29, 2010
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It's our fire now
Gloria! Gloria! Come home you birds-eye view
from the big, humid blue, these rooftops
scrape your paradise true as we're all
guilty of something, not worthy of anything
but absolution through a penal code, a
kinky design,- our fathers' belts will do for now,
till we're prostrate in front of You
Have pity then
Whisk us in Sulphur and Medicine Blues
and news of good prospects in space?
— doorman, Jan 29, 2010
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yenti
16 years 3 months ago
Doorman
doorman
16 years 3 months ago
Never really felt done with