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The Death of a Soldier in The First World War

The body of a soldier
over in No Man's Land

Bullets have ripped
through his body

His wool uniform
soaked in blood
and covered in mud

A look of terror
on his face
as if he is
about to die

One can only wonder
what horrors he has seen

How many of his comrades
that have fallen
before his eyes

His flesh rotting
waiting for burial
to return to the earth

Never reporting for duty again
but at ever lasting peace

His soul not having to
wander the earth for all eternity
— Benjamin1987, Jan 29, 2010

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Region, Country: Boston, Massachusetts, USA

Favorite Poets: The Beat Generation

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Ben

wonder the earth should this be wander? in his eyes what would you say to before his eyes why oh why can you not find a titled to this poem A soldiers cry As he lay dieing The horror he has seen just to name a few and they all came from the body of your poem Chrys
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Millage

16 years 3 months ago

Very powerful

This is a very graphic write mate. I found it very moving. Thank you. Great stuff pal. I think the title you have is great also. Much love Millage x
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Grabbed me and made me reflect

Great one you wrote here. I loved it will be back for more visits magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.