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"Fata Morgana over the Post Office."

 

"Outside the Post Office." 

 

Above the town 

a mirage hung 

a wood

of snow-clad trees 

in gowns of white, 

a magic wood 

up in the sky

of grey below

buoyed up this apparition, 

dreamed,

a backcloth so theatrical 

it seemed to sway

lit by the low primeval sun, 

its glow

so tinted green;

if I was told 'twas Paradise,

or even Hell,

my mind held mesmerised  

its strange spell

a screen between the earth, 

the sky,

those forests floated, 

still

a spectred troup with textured shrouds

etched white,

forever marching on towards 

the drapes of night.

 



— Nordic cloud, Jan 29, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

in the car outside the PO

I was parked and sitting in the car outside the PO when I looked at the sky and there was this mirage-like apparition up there, it was so strange looking. Not a good poem but fun thought eh! You are not foolish at all, and I don't mind explaining, things of nature set in contrast with those of man have always fascinated me and here the town and the wildness of the forest outside was the contrast I found eerie. Love Annskie bird
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Outside the P.O...

I didn't quite make the connection either. Thank you for the explanation. Now that I have the thought, I see how you would be transfixed by the scene. Marvelous! I see the forest and the trees! It sounds as eerie as it must have looked! ~ You have given me a vision, of the majesty of trees overshadowing the town. It must have been riveting. Your faithful knight, ~ Sir Gee
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ann

Mystical. Great to read and envision. Sounds a peaceful moment in front of the post office. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ann

Your magical mind takes us there and shows it to us ... beautifully done lovely love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x