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Jan 29, 2010
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"Fata Morgana over the Post Office."
"Outside the Post Office."
Above the town
a mirage hung
a wood
of snow-clad trees
in gowns of white,
a magic wood
up in the sky
of grey below
buoyed up this apparition,
dreamed,
a backcloth so theatrical
it seemed to sway
lit by the low primeval sun,
its glow
so tinted green;
if I was told 'twas Paradise,
or even Hell,
my mind held mesmerised
its strange spell
a screen between the earth,
the sky,
those forests floated,
still
a spectred troup with textured shrouds
etched white,
forever marching on towards
the drapes of night.
— Nordic cloud, Jan 29, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
in the car outside the PO
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
Outside the P.O...
lyz
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann