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Vocabulus Eruptus

My argent blitz is cubic with
degenerate echos of foxfire
as gasping Hittites ingest
jellied kippers and licorice moose

Neolithic otters perform quantum
repititions of sanctimonious tirades
as ubiquitus vermin and wanton
xenophobes yell and zoom

Amoebic blunders characterize
my decisions and explain the
Freudian generalities that hamper
illicit justice and kinky luminescence

Myriad Napoleonic oppressors pirouette
and qualify for rapscallion status
as tenacious upstarts vacillate
and wordlessly xray youthful zebras

Androgenous bullfrogs cavort and
dramatize extremely frivolous genocide
while Hermaphroditic imbeciles
jokingly kibbitz about livid molecules

Narcissitic opportunists precisely
question robust Seraphim about
tangible unmentionables as volcanic
weasels xerox Yugoslavian zombies

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, Jan 29, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Lonnie….who let loose the

Lonnie....who let loose the pheromones today? Howling at the moon! This is one of the coolest poems, Lonnie. You're too sexy for your shirt. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1vxtirJ7T8 "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Anna!

I had lots of fun with this one and I hope shows! Thanks for stopping by!
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Laugh my fucking arse off!

Brilliant mate, you made my day. Etraordinary the way you lifted the self-imposed structure to divine madness. Neolithic otters perform quantum repititions of sanctimonious tirades so many great images Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

However, I see one spelling

However, I see one spelling error. Did I just .... a ...dream? ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Sir Elf!

Seems I discovered your weakness, you're a sucker for exploding Thesauruses! LOL!! Anyways, glad you had a chuckle or three!
wolfycat

wolfycat

16 years 4 months ago

Woahhhhh...

Me thinks you may have spilled your dictionary this morning:) cool write!!
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

COMMENTS

I SEE MOST OF THE POETS HERE R DOUBLING TEIR OWN COMMENTS BY WRITING THEIR REPLIES IN EACH CASE AND THAT LEAVES THE READERS WONDERING FOR THE NEXT TIME NEXT POEM READ .PL DO READ SOME OF MINE AND COMMENT THANKS SIR LOVED
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

loved, I have given you many suggestions on getting more feedbac

This is not a private club thing. When you see lots of people commenting on each others poems it is usually people who are serious about improving their poetic craft meeting with like-minded people. We all give comments on other works as well. When was the last time you gave critical feedback on lonely poems or new members or anyone? Or responded to critical feedback on your work? Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible