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Jan 29, 2010
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silver ribbons of moon
eyes have become
resolute,
wandering the walls
and fixtures
roaming epoch,
hands that mercury envies
read the craters,
and each aperture glows
with sterling egress,
lips part as two half's
of miracles,
and the first tide
rolled to birth,
as quicksilver lies with
the stars,
cannoned beauty falls
in silver ribbons,
writhing bound
and full this night,
eclipsed
in sheets of moon
— Seren, Jan 29, 2010
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Seren
16 years 4 months ago
EGRESS, EPOCH, APERTURE
CyberSpace
16 years 4 months ago
fucking orsm baby lol and
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
No worries i told you I
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Our Seren is now explaining
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
LOL was for Snake …he
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Yeah. But he holds you day
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
You would be surprised if I
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
OMG!
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Dale
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
Hey Jayne!
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Dale
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Dale
Millage
16 years 4 months ago
Really good Hun!
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Mile man
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
I read it!
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dearest Gee ~!!!!
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
Been kinda out of it...
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Gee,I will still call