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Out of body out of mind. Life

 It was Xena's "Out of Body" poem that got me thinking and I wrote this:-

I lay and thought myself a boat as I rose out of my body to float above and see below myself as in a mirror image there asleep, how strong ones sense of being in this mysterious world, a world in fact of no space, as elements are there between us even though unseen, our senses ours, and yet they can detect another's within them too, we're not so separate as we always think, floating in the element air connected there. Just as the candle flame when pushed into snow does not expire, it burns on with the oxygen in the snow. H2O.

 

We grow from seed like plants and spend our lives like them becoming seeds again, so our bodies are only the husk, the seed pods in the end spent and unneeded more except to nurture those who need our help, so to expire and become yet again part of the earths crust. Why should we feel sad, or wish to live forever? The natural flow of birth and death is what is here, our "fine" tuned minds can contemplate and create heavens and hells, grand ideas outside ourselves, fantasies, enact plays about other worlds and spaces, yet here we are on this earth's crust, we have to follow as we must, its natural flowing creed, no greed will let us find another way another day, another life, we are and we are not, that's LIFE. 

Its all as simple as that.

 

We are the variations on the fugue of life, the original fugue is life. We are one, each one living cell the variations on the fugue, the millions and millions of variations and I am one of these, the most puzzling beautifully simple fact of life. Happy am I to have been able to take part in it, this life. We each make our own mark, our mark on our own lives and on those we meet.

 

From what our minds contemplate come extensions, individuation, fantasies on themes of what we experience, perceive and out of these musings about all life comes art. We sweep the brush, filled with rich colours across the white sheet of life's canvas, each in out own individual way, the winds and weathering of our lives adding or subtracting colours as we go. The finished canvas, one puff in the journey of the dandelion seed, is written, shouted, danced, unique each living thing; wonderful, exquisite, and each has her/his own song to sing in her/his own way. We can rejoice when we find those who can understand us and with us sway and in that pleasure have a happy day. A day of life.

 

The philosophy is simple, life  is simple, it is  humans who make it complicated  and difficult to understand.

And what do you think? Margaret Ann Waddicor.


— Nordic cloud, Jan 29, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

The wind and the brush what

The wind and the brush what a lovely picture you paint. Hope all is well and will catch up with you soon dearest Ann Love Mona
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Ann!

Heya Ann, This is a contemplative write with the basis of all life floating the sea of the cosmos... Yes people do make things more complicated than it needs to be, if viewed the world through the eyes of a child or through the ecology of the world or even from animal instinct point of view everything would be an endless cycle of life in simple terms... I think as people really what we are here for is to pass on or share our knowledge and experiences. To truly connect just reach out and find someone who wants to listen. I very exploration of thought here Ann and thanks for sharing your enlightenment with us... it has left my mind aglow with the swirl od sentience! Dale :)
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Angel of Poets

I stand corrected...Angel of the Arts of Writing. I can't believe that you wrote this beautiful flawless piece of writing so quickly! And I'm honoured that this was inspired by my poem. Do you have any published books, short stories or poems? If you don't then the world is missing out. I don't normally read short stories, books etc; because of my menial education. Too many big words spoil it for somenone like me and I quickly lose interest as I can't keep looking up the dictionary every five minutes. However I'm intelligent in mind, I even have to check my spelling every so often, quite a lot actually, before submitting a comment. This writing was skilled and easy to understand so it touched my heart like no short story could ever do. As you know my sister Catherine used to send me her short stories to type up for her from her hand written stories. She mainly wrote about our family. I'm flabbergasted Ann. I'm so proud of this short story. Ann; Angel of the Arts Rosina
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Flabbergasted oh gee!

That's quite a word isn't it and so descriptive of its meaning, the sound of it. I love to write prose and have done a lot of shorter pieces perhaps I should post some more but there are several here already! I am not so sure you should call me an angel, I can only fly when I am writing or hearing music or in love! Oh what on earth does one say to such comments I don't really know, its a beautiful, lovely comment dear kind mystery loving Rosina of the Scottish mists. I do to use difficult words to impress only when there are no simpler words that express exactly what I want to say. Oh Rosina thank you, thank you you dear, from Anskie bird.
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

I call you angel because...

I've also read a lot of your kind comments to other writers and the help that you give them. Especially me. So you don't have to fly to be an angel Ann. Yer Scottish pal Rosina
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Och aye Scotland is beautiful isn't it?

Oh but I want to fly Rosina, and if writing poetry gives me wings then I shall continue till it does. Och aye, Scottish blood and Scottish genes, so we can fly can't we. over the moors in the night sky with the will o' the wisp clouds, or on those galleons of cumulus clouds that ride the hills, over the purrrple heatherrr and the bluer than blue sea. Och aye Scotland is beautiful isn't it? Rabbie Burns can tell a tale too can't he? In his most wonderful dialect, we have many totally different dialects in Norway some quite special and always poetic; what we speak in Oslo is what was left over fro the Danes(SH!!) They don't like to think thus but it is so. So all tax forms etc are in two languages, the NEW norsk and the 'Danish-type' norsk, the new gathered from the wilds and constructed, wow some countries make communications difficult. Imagine the children have to learn the ancient norse as well as the two languages, as well as their own accent at home, and now they are allowed to write their dialects so there is a buzz of musical sound in this country, quiet rich and particular. Much poetry here is in those dialects too. I worked in a shop when I first came here, the customers teaching me the language as I went, and thereby I learnt many dialects as the shop was a handicraft one and many people from all over Norway made items for sale in the shop,I even corresponded with some of the 'workers' and that was interesting, I met many different people there, fun for nine years then I did my own thing, lived on my art 17yrs. self employed!! Not lucrative a bit like living like a Gypsy, begging to sell my wares. I diverse as aye, as aye Anskie bird with love to you dear Rosina. Thank you again.