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Jan 28, 2010
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Train Ride
Another train ride,
to little expectations of delight but he, always there
watching, waiting
caught my eye
tall dark smooth and enticing such a carnal instinct came about me
I had to reach out and touch
whispered in his ear
"take me here" hands like water sweeping over me
his tongue, those lips
so wet, so soft
trailing my body knowing there target in open air for all to see
eyes staring from there corner
concentrating, contemplating
mind lustfully salivating passing through tunnels
constant illusion of strobe lights
making an erotic show
of bodies in pure delight deeper and harder,
faster and louder
climax coming full speed ahead
an eruption of lucid ecstasy snap back to reality,
just another long train ride
to little expectations of delight but he, always there
watching, waiting
caught my eye
tall dark smooth and enticing such a carnal instinct came about me
I had to reach out and touch
whispered in his ear
"take me here" hands like water sweeping over me
his tongue, those lips
so wet, so soft
trailing my body knowing there target in open air for all to see
eyes staring from there corner
concentrating, contemplating
mind lustfully salivating passing through tunnels
constant illusion of strobe lights
making an erotic show
of bodies in pure delight deeper and harder,
faster and louder
climax coming full speed ahead
an eruption of lucid ecstasy snap back to reality,
just another long train ride
— DimondDivinity, Jan 28, 2010
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thewaitingroom
16 years 4 months ago
WOW!
DimondDivinity
16 years 4 months ago
i hear you miss annie, i
heartbreaker
16 years 4 months ago
wow another great no not
DimondDivinity
16 years 4 months ago
yes punctuation and grammer